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Reviews for Desire

By : sabisan
  • From ANON - veggiefan2 on September 04, 2006
    Was that some sort of rape? Or....is there something im missing?
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 12, 2006
    Definitely not bad. I like your style, but I thought it was a litte rushed in areas. Of course, sometimes that is the nature of a one shot. I could feel you building up the anticipation, but almost long enough. I do see the potential there though.

    Please continue writing DBZ yaoi stories. I'd like to see how you develope them!

    Macha


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