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Reviews for A Price to Pay

By : Twylight
  • From ANON - Touji on January 21, 2006
    ZOMG!!!!!!!! XD I can hardly TELL you how much this story rocks my world! I don't care if it's just a fanfiction, it's my favorite story in the entire world!!!!!!!! Every part, detail, chapter, sentence, paragraph, has me glued to the paper! And whats more, I actually LOVE the plot just as much as the lemon!!!!!!!!!!!! :D I love your writing, and I LOVE Ed and Roy!!!!!! ^^- I find myself giggling, laughing, and saying things like "Aaaaaaawwwwwwww~~!!!!!!!!! XD" I just think the whole is so damn CUTE!!!!!!!!!! The way they're in the hallway, or when they waved at each other, said the missed each other, or when ed fell asleep on his chest, when the 'made love' @@, etc. THIS STORY IS TOO GOOD FOR MY OWN WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEEEEEEEE PLEEEEAAAASSSSSEEE PLEEEEAAASSSSSEEEE ADD MORE!!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 20, 2006
    ROY!!!! Just say i love you already!! heh loved it loved that they got caught but by everyone!! I laughed so hard. And omg! roy made love to Ed and not just a delicious case of fucking XD! That was hot!! Can't wait to read more. Great great as always =3
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    This is so cute!
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  • From ANON - Arra on January 19, 2006
    You're so evil! Just leaving it right there! That's... EVIL!!!
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 19, 2006
    OMG!!! OMG!!! Al has just witnessed something hot!! XD I mean omg what will happen now? That was hot and of them being caught by Al!! OMG!! I can't stop my OMGs XD Awesome chapter please keep it up =3
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  • From ANON - Kai on January 18, 2006
    OH HELL NO! I WILL NOT ALLOW YOU TO STOP RIGHT THERE!!!!!! I love this story I really do that why I must say this: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! I just burst out laughing when Al walked in going 'this was gonna happen sooner or later.' Hey at least it was the younger brother and not that Bastard Archer. On and one more thing: WHY THE HELL DIDN'T YOU LET ROY TOAST HIS ASS!!! I KNOW HE LIVES TILL THE FINAL EPOSODE, BUT HE STILL NEEDS TO DIE!!!! Sorry. Im competely anti Archer. Oh well. Continue please and your'll be my new best friend ^-^

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  • From ANON - juna on January 18, 2006
    Yes Roy you better fall had for Ed! BWA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA! Great chapter. =3
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 17, 2006
    Dreams no wait halucinations rock. XD Awsome chapter and omg! Roy is gaining felings for Ed! I knew it! I have thepower!! XD Okay sorry random right there Update soon. =3
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  • From ANON - waruikittycat on January 16, 2006
    For a while there I thought that it was Envy using Ed's form, but no it was a dream. Yay! I really like this fic. It's starting to get sweet. The sweet part of their relationship is probably why this is my OTP.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2006
    Oh my god! This is getting so cute!
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  • From ANON - senko09 on January 16, 2006
    cool, write some more! (gets on hands and knees) PLZZZ.......this is one of my favorite stories. :)
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  • From ANON - Ri on January 16, 2006
    Hot and spicy! XD I mean loved it, can't wait for the next chapter. Love how Hughes is picking on Roy about what is going on between them. Great chapter as the first two. Keep them coming. ^^
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  • From ANON - AV on January 15, 2006
    OMG...I love this!!! It's rough and hot, but not dark. Absolutely awsome. The sex is just burning hot, and I really like the way Roy is so rough. And still the story is cute. Very nicely written ^_^ Please write more! You are great!
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  • From ANON - senko09 on January 15, 2006
    that was a great chapter!!!!!!!!!!write more! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 15, 2006
    *Wipes drool* OMG! That was utterly hot!! Ed jerking off in the shower! Thinking about Roy!! And then here comes anoterh hot scene of Ed RIDING Roy!! OMG!! That was hot hot hot!!! I am drooling still!! Wonderful job. Update soon!! I hope one of them starts gaining feelings and making this whole matter complicating. That would be neat. Well your story and i say it is already good so keep it up. =3
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