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Reviews for A Price to Pay

By : Twylight
  • From ANON - Pickles on January 15, 2006
    This is real good, but the whole using Japanese words in your story thing is a little annoying. Not ALL people know what those words mean, and they shouldn't have to have a Japanese to English dictionary to enjoy your story should they? Even if you DID put the translations of what the words mean at the bottom or the top of the story, Fullmetal Alchemist is set in a more European if not western society. Not once during the anime or manga does it suggest that Japan even exists in their world. They wouldn't be speaking Japanese to begin with.

    Any way, keep it up, this is a really neat idea.
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  • From ANON - Makkura arashi on January 13, 2006
    this was fun! and it was so hot! please write a longer one with more chapters next time!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2006
    please continue moremore!
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  • From ANON - Ri on January 13, 2006
    OMG!!! I loved it!! I do hope you add more chapters! That was awesome! Loved the last part! Awesome!! Keep it up cause i think this is a fabulous story!!!
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  • From ANON - happyonna on January 13, 2006
    Hey I liked it!! I'm happy, though, that it'll have a plot. I'm all for PWP but it gets old after a while. Hooray for Roy/Ed. Write more because you're helping inugrlrayn add to my insomnia! *snerk*
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2006
    Brilliant!

    I so need moooore!
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  • From ibshafer on January 12, 2006
    This reads like a doujinshi - I like that.... You have a great ear (eye?) for dialogue. Both Ed and Roy sound very much in character. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
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