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Reviews for The Flame Variable

By : Metranome
  • From ANON - Talakailover on October 10, 2006
    What in the world are you so anxious about. Your story is great, and the way you've portrayed their relationship is downright adorable. Two thumbs up.
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  • From ANON - jen on October 02, 2006
    *lowers gun* geeze, just cause u asked...that and cause i dont see many guy writers, u are a rarity..lol. pleeze hurry with the next chapter!!! i wanna see what happens!!!
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  • From ANON - maia on September 30, 2006
    lol, I bitch alot too don't worry. your doing really well with this story... and as far as I know you're not on my 'kill' list..l so relax ^-^ later!
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  • From ANON - Metranome on June 08, 2006
    Hai, hai! I'll finish this, I promise! I've had a lot of other projects going at the same time, and I hate being rushed so much that when I'm shoved, I shove back instead of letting myself be pushed to work. It's a character flaw. n_n;; Also, I'm having a hard time making the second chapter live up to the first. But I WILL finish this, so please be patient!
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  • From ANON - Sachi on June 03, 2006
    *chokes on food with laughter*

    Wait, wait... there's only one chapter. Nuuu! That is beyond cruel. Don't leave us off here! Pleease.
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  • From ANON - ibshafer on January 25, 2006
    More, please. 'K? I've been patient - I swear... So unlike me, too. And now... Now I just want more.

    Get cracking, eh? You *promised*...

    Oh, and - this was great! A great twist, turning what we thought we knew on its ear. And I love the relationship between them, am dying to see that played out in the next chapter. Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Sevlow on January 24, 2006
    interesting concept to say the least. Fun and humorous, and your tranquility vs. silence metaphors made me giggle with English Major-y glee! I only wish you'd gotten on to the "teaching" part, I'm sure it would be deliciously awkward and funny!
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  • From ANON - aspiker on January 20, 2006
    Actually, this is pretty good! I like the way you've developed the characters and their long, complex friendship. That Roy is a virgin is a wonderful twist to the old "lady/man killer" Roy usually seen in fics. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in your next chapter. 8-)
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  • From ANON - meteor on January 19, 2006
    This is amazing. Both were perfectly in character and I can't wait to see the next chapter. ;) Fantastic work.
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  • From ANON - Ingonyama on January 15, 2006
    Roy Mustang, the Flam(ing HAWT!) Alchemist, a virgin? Once that leap of credibility's been crossed, I think you have the makings of one incredible fic here. Don't lose the momentum; I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - happtonna on January 13, 2006
    Mmm... I don't usually read Maes/Roy (I'm a Roy/Ed fan) but, I can honestly say that this was well done and very believeable because: 1: It's sort of cannon. In the series you see Roy talk about women, and miniskirts, but you don't really see him attached to anyone but Riza. (at least I haven't); 2: The reason I don't read Maes/Roy fics is because Hughes is so completely besotted with Gracia. However, I can really see Maes trying to help Roy in such a situation (because I really think he loves his friend as much as his wife and child). So... Good job, and I'm patiently (sort of) waiting for the next chapter.
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