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Reviews for Branded

By : ibshafer
  • From ANON - mariantarielle on August 04, 2006
    Glad to see this posted and read the final product! I love this story with a fiery passion! I can't wait to read more! :-D Fantastic work as usual!

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  • From EveNightingale on August 03, 2006
    Still with the jumping, take my word for it, not only is it original (what you're doing with the clueless 'Team Elric') but it's well written. Almost to a 'Tee'! I still get alittle confused as to what's happening. I had trouble determining wether they were in the hall or the bed at one point and wether it was day or night at another. Try to work on your settings a little, focus on the surroundings rather that Ed and Winry's feelings. Don't opt out on them, just add to the fic.

    Other than that I love this story and will continue to read! Update soon.

    -Eve Nightingale
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  • From ANON - Nymphetamine Girl on August 03, 2006
    I kept forgetting to review. Shame on me. ;_; THIS FIC IS MAKING LEMON/LIME FIC HISTORY. Seriously, with Ed being so realistically clueless, not very good and unsure this is history in the making. This is the first fanfic like this I've ever come across that had Ed BAD at sex. He may be sex on legs but that doesn't mean he knows what to do when it comes to it. XDDD Poor, poor Winry. She's so turned on by just the way he LOOKS (Heck, I'm surprised she doesn't "finish" just by looking at him, to be honest. XD) and yet that's as far as the poor girl gets. Hahaha! Ed and Winry need to tag team and beat the royal crap out of Roy. I love how he screws it all up without even being present. That's classic Roy. I also loved how both of them didn't really have good material. Ed had that goofy pamphlet and Winry had, I think, a romance novel. So... Winry may be thinking a bit unrealistically and Ed isn't thinking enough. SO GOOD. I really hope they get it right in the end. The two deserve it. .... Well, Winry does anyway. XD Keep it up! I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Alex on August 01, 2006
    This is such a great idea, Ed being bad at sex haha because so many people have him be amazing (which, like you said, with a body like that, he has to be great doesn't he?) but he's on the road so much he doesnt have time to think about sex. This is a great story, I hope you do do that lemony outtake of part three. Oh poor Winry haha. keep writing! After this, are you gonna write more FMA fanfics?
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  • From Serenanna on July 30, 2006
    That review was from me, Serenanna. ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2006
    ::falls over:: You! I love your stories, but I hate you for being so inspiring! Branded is what possessed me into writing Overhaul, and from there it spiraled out of control. I blame my FMA fandom on you! I don't know how you do it. How do you manage to write so much humor without breaking character? I like how Ed wasn't good that first time, breaking that convention, and am curious how he'll err, improve. Good to see you writing again. ;)
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  • From ANON - Alex on July 30, 2006
    Ahhh this is awesome. Don't see many fics where people suck their first time, I'm glad to see people in reality for once.
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  • From ANON - Alex on July 27, 2006
    Ahhh I loved chapter two! you got Al to ask about sex while still keeping him in character, not many people can do that. Keep writing! Chapter 1 was great too! When's chapter three coming out?
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  • From EveNightingale on July 18, 2006
    Wow, that was really, really good. I got a little confused at some parts, but overall, it was a good story. I liked it, it was all suggestive and sexy, really and truly, and enjoyable read.

    I really can't wait to read more! ^o^
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  • From ANON - Miss Woodford on June 27, 2006
    Hey there, glad to see you are active again. I also see you have opened a livejournal account. I thought of it myself, but I'm not as half as prolific or talented as most of the people there. Plus, I already have a blog (on tv.com), and keeping one updated is enough work. Please keep up the great work - you make smut fun again.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 23, 2006
    [Pppfffttt!!! Pppfffttt!!!] ... Is this thing on...?

    Jsut checking to see if the "microphone" is working. 'Cuz it wasn't. And usually people have something to say. Which they don't seem to at the moment...

    Hmmmmm....

    Is this thing on?


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  • From ANON - wendi on February 09, 2006
    I *HATE* winry/ed!!!!!!!!!!!!! good story, if winry wasnt in it it'd be better
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  • From sailtheplains on February 03, 2006
    That totally cracked me up. I'm not a yaoi fan--so this was an excellent find for me. It was hilarious. It had just the right amount of spunk and jokes and teasing--it was awesome! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Marlemon on February 03, 2006
    I'm so glad to see you!!! I can't wait for an update on this fic and Equilibrium. I love them both so very much! I can't wait to read more. So, not to rush you, but HURRY! ;-) I know, you can't rush art so I'll do my best to be patient. Thanks for the great reads.
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  • From bigdon2005 on January 31, 2006
    good story but need to make the chapters longer. i know how hard it is.

    later
    Yashafan
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