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Reviews for Humiliation

By : meteor
  • From Blysse on December 10, 2008
    I have to say that the second chapter of this was undoubtedly the single hottest thing I have ever read. I must've re-read the part near the end where Ed just kept coming and coming about 5 or 6 times! That was just... *Twitch*

    Well done, and I'd love to see an update on this story in the near future!

    --Blysse
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  • From ANON - pj on December 08, 2006
    Nice. Very, very nice ;) ^^
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  • From ANON - Finn on November 10, 2006
    'nother chapter plz? i want more of that XD
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  • From ANON - Frozen_taho on September 30, 2006
    Damn, Roy was such a freak. Then again, Ed isnt much better off. All in all, a twisted affair.
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  • From ANON - Frozen_taho on September 30, 2006
    Yeah, I'm going to need a minute to process what I just read....

    ...Ok. I've been reading fanfics for years and have never shrunk away from smut (except when threesomes are involved. thats just too messy), but this one had more than the normal share of WTF moments. What were you smoking and where can I get some?
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  • From ANON - wild seven on September 08, 2006
    Very interesting... I liked it, actually, though I was surprised at first. Not what I expected... :) (:
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  • From ANON - Artemis on August 23, 2006
    *drools* omg that was sooo hot go Ed who know you were such a whore

    Ed: I thought you love me Artemis O_o

    Artemis: I do...but your a little Roy-whore

    Ed: does that even...exist

    Artemis: yes it does >< great story update soon...so Ed will shut the hell up

    Ed: I thought you loved me

    Artemis: I DO your just a Roy-whore face fact Edo
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  • From ANON - Ri on August 16, 2006
    O_O;;;;;; OMG!!! How hot was this chapter? I mean dang! It was smutty!!! OMG! SMUTTY! Loved it >>
    Update soon! So dirty. Glad you updated ^_^, so keep the smut coming.!!! Please.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on January 21, 2006
    THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR!! I'm so happy, I'm so happy! XD I love this kind of stuff. Domination in fics, is just my thing, heh. Please write more? This was excellent. Roy being so harsh was so hot. That whole window scene was amazing, I'm at a lost for words. No to sound redundant but... I LOVE this stuff! ^^
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  • From ANON - Ri on January 19, 2006
    That was hot!! you must write more like this one! BRILLIANT!!!
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  • From ANON - NightRobin on January 18, 2006
    Awesome Job. Wow this was !@#@#$$ awesome! So hot! excellent work!
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  • From ANON - Fifi McFu on January 18, 2006
    wow... SO kinky, I LOVE IT!!!!!! *melts*
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