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Reviews for The Mirai Trunks Complex

By : amaterasuqueen
  • From ANON - ninjakitty on February 02, 2006
    *does happy dance* another chapter yeah!!!
    as much as i dislike the older trunks for what he intends to do i like the way you've written him, very dark, brings a new twist to the innocent and polite Trunks we all know.
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  • From ANON - Dark_Soul_Caldren on January 31, 2006
    Fucking right! I like your attitude that you dispay in your a/ns. This is worth reviewing for sure.
    Though the subject matter isn't my favorite by any means your writing is titilating. I cant even
    imagine what awaits the readers.

    By all means please continue!!
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  • From ANON - Rob on January 31, 2006
    I love it! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - NJNlolo on January 31, 2006
    Sex, sex, and more sex. Or I kill everyone with an asteroid. Life is a cruel mistress and I'm the hardcore bitch with the vibrator.

    Yeah, wait, what?
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 30, 2006
    *ROFL* Why did you have to put those author's notes at the end? Now I've forgotten most of what I wanted to say!

    Okay, the important part, I hope Vegeta does watch his back day, night... sleeps with one eye open. I don't think I would appreciate how MT made me feel either. *shudders*

    As far as the touching goes with Bulma, I think it's going to take a bit before she catches on. The idea has got to be so foreign, it's amlost unthinkable.
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  • From Camaro on January 25, 2006
    Hey hey hey! What's up you?!

    Well, I wanted to drop by, I know I've probably reviewed this like.. 8 times throughout the years I've known you but I will say to this day, it remains one of my ultimate favorite pieces of literature. It's a constant inspiration and incentive to go farther than you will! hahaha.. like a constant battle to out-do each other with the "too far-ness".

    Yet, yours is still poetic and beautiful, the dialogue very human yet betraying in a few words what most people would struggle for chapters to express. You have that power and it exhaults you in every chapter. In a glance, you can speak novels through your characters.

    They're so complex. I can't call them 3D or 4D or anything of the sort. They're an entirely different creation when you put your heart into them. I dare say, I think they're just about as complicated as you are, or perhaps, in some ways, perspectives of you that you've subconsciously inculcated into characters.


    You're truly amazing you know that? Someday, this world will kneel for your talent.. I mean that. Years of loving and hating you and one thing remains the same. You are an absolute fucking artist at what you do.

    This story grasps that. I can't wait to see what you have in store babe.

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 24, 2006
    WHOOT.... Bunnie Girl! And here I had given up all hope on this twisted story. *BIG GRIN* Glad to see your posting it here at AFF.

    I'll save longer reviews for the parts I haven't read yet.
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  • From ANON - ninjakitty on January 24, 2006
    if this is the story i started reading on ff.net i can't wait to read this. i never got to the end of the other so please update soon.
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