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Reviews for Monster 2: Resurrection

By : Camaro

From darkstar7789 on January 01, 2012
Oh my gosh! Noo!! It just got right to the good stuff and poof! I am seriously craving for another update. Please! It can't end like this... *crying* Sry, I'm so emotional, but you've got me hooked on this stuff so deep, I don't even wanna get out. Awesome job with the story, like I already predicted. Can't wait for the rest. Hope you can put 'em up soon. :) *hugs, blood, and chocolate*
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From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2007
Now this one made my skin crawl! I loved it, too bad you discontinued. Hope someday you can pick it up again.
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From Camaro on March 03, 2007

Hahaha, uhhh ass crab, who's stalking WHOSE review board? Last I checked, I was entirely civil in my first review, merely requesting that you DO put a warning since obvious FIRST remarks about it were deleted AND ignored. Since you're apparently too fucking thick (hahah is anyone here surprised by this? From reading your story, yeah... no big shocker there.) to take a VERY kindly worded comment from a fellow author, I simply felt you needed another reminder that warnings are there for a purpose so that people with, you know, "taste" don't have to stumble across your spewed out cow shit, mistaking it for something worth while.

And for future reference, I'd really drop this for your own sake. I have the habit of publicly making a TOTAL ass (not to say you'd probably need a lot of help in this regard) of someone who goes out of their way to irritate me. Long story short hun, just leave warnings for people that don't enjoy minor content and the like. That way people who really aren't fond of that type of story don't have to waste their time, and yours, reading something they hate.

Sheesh, was it really worth all that? Just take advice once in a while without bitching m'kay?

Camaro
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From ROGUEFURY on March 03, 2007
Wow. Seems to me you got your nipples in such a twist that you gotta find some relief by ripping me. I deleted the first comment cuz it had nothing to do with the content of my fic, and also because it was fucking rude and asinine. You know what I do when I stumble onto something I didn't "intend" to read? I move on! Because that's what a mature reader does; not stalk the person's comment board and berate them because their sensibilities were jolted a bit. Grow up and go back to playing with your sandy vagina, you immature cunt ^_^!
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From ANON - Kat on February 06, 2007
OMG, OMG, OMG!!!!! I can�t believe this was updated and I didn�t notice!!!! Not only that, but I have to catch up on Perfection too!!

�Bulma had been fucking hysterical, leaving the house, coming back to the house, leaving once again and returning only when the corpse had been cremated and every item of hers had been removed from the bedroom.�

Wait a minute� you mean someone actually dug up her father�s corpse??!!! *shudders* (side note: still wigging out about the maggots) BTW, I do find it really sad that Bulma actually has to ask Goku if he put her father�s corpse in their bed.

�I moved closer on my perch, longing to hold her suddenly, to understand why despite our moments, our lives together, she could never love me.�

And why, may I ask, is Bulma supposed to love him when he�s so obviously not in love with her?

Also, major Bulma in denial here. The maid�s missing, so of course she was the one who put the corpse in the bed. *sweat drops*

Then again, Goku�s not doing too much better, is he? Neither of them seem capable of living in the real world. Maybe Gohan IS better off like he is now�

Goku fell asleep wrapped in Satan�s arms. LOL, the press would love that!!

I�d just like to note that I�m to where Goku has just tripped up the stairs in front of his bedroom door. I wanted to stop here for a second, even though it�s killing me, to say that damn but you write suspense very well. I can�t even sit still! Excellent job here :)

�And sorry about the mess,� He pointed to the blood stains. �but I thought rose peddles were a bit�� clich�, don�t you think?�

LOL. Pure Camaro right there.

�Oh, you know,� He said nonchalantly, stretching out his gloved fingers and regarding me with little interest. �running his half of hell, terrorizing anyone who questions him. You know, being his temperamental little self.�

Well, *laugh*, I guess that answers my questions about Vegeta. I should have realized he�d be enjoying his reign over half of Hell. I wonder if that includes Freiza. That would be hilarious!!

Interesting, �Vegeta� won�t tell him why now and not before.

WooHoo!! Kudos to Goku for resisting him �cause damn that was hot!! LOL. Great way to end off the chapter, not that I doubted you for a moment. Anyway, again, sorry I haven�t reviewed this chapter yet!! *Hugs* Computers can be a pain.
Now I�m heading on over to Perfection!!
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From ANON - sveta on January 07, 2007
this chapter is amazing, as always. i've been checking up on this regularly for months for the next update. i never mind the wait because your writing is so outstanding. i'm really sorry to hear things haven't been going well with you. i hope your problems have gone away and you're feeling better.

i really thought kakarot would give in a little here since he's realized he loves vegeta. i don't even know whose side i'm on, but i love their incessant conflict. and vegeta is too irresistible!
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From ANON - Asha on January 04, 2007
YAY! omg, I have been waiting so impatiently for more ^-^ and Vegeta is back. Oh yeah. Evil is BACK IN TOWN! *dance* anyways, glad you still exist, glad this story is still going, and hope for more soon!
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From ANON - vegetachik7 on January 03, 2007
Oooo! I loved it! I'm so excited that devil Vegeta has returned. I'm sure other readers will agree when I say we've missed him! :) I think you're well aware that I'm amazingly impressed by your writing style and amazing descriptions of both characters and scenes. I am anxious to see what Vegeta has planned now. Does he just want Goku or destruction of the world or something more? Well...I can see that this is going to get even better..sooo...Great stuff!
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From ANON - Michelle on January 03, 2007
Ah yes, and Vegeta is a gorgeous man even in death- how does he do it?

I'm glad to see that that Lola situation has been dealt with completely, i think it was Macha who ended it- good job (to all of you)-

Now, I love it so much, Goku's holding up so strongly it's suprising due to the fact that he has spent so much time thinking about him, about this, and wanting this. I'm actually kind of proud, even though I desperately crave for the contact. Oh, well, all in due time I suppose.

Can't wait to read the rest, I hope things gets better for you
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From ANON - Macha on January 03, 2007
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! OMG, you're back! Vegeta's back! Kakarott's true angst is BACK!

Goku is just a mess, isn't he? Let's leave the safety of home, and go visit the abandoned mansion? Sleep in a bed that's probably covered in mold from those windows being open for the last 5 years. Sleep like the dead, and when you come to, realize that 'he' is at your house. And the only thought in his head was to go and see him.

Sure, sure, he tells Vegeta/Satan he doesn't want it, but we've been reading 6 and now another half chapter of how much he does. *sighs* Goku's going to fight his desire...he seems to get a pervse sense of right from doing so, but that's going to make his fall so much harder, if he does cave. Satan's giving him one free night...I don't think it's going to be roses after this though.

Vegeta's got an agenda, and I don't think Goku staying alive is a part of it.
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From ANON - Zogeta on November 12, 2006
Waaaah! Don't leave it THERE!

Trunks is a sick, twisted little animal-ripper, and is clearly the Anti-Christ. Well done, Bulma. Slag.

I don't know what to say, Camaro. This unearthly, magnificent talent of yours for angst and gore and description never ceases to draw me further and further into your awesomely dark world. While the above may sound like a back-handed compliment, please don't mistake it for anything less than honest awe. Decidedly drop-jawed amaxement that words can enact what you tell them to, that your command is so absolute that I see everything that you portray, that I'm stuck between sympathy for Kakarot and outward irritation that he didn't just go with Vegeta. Gone to enjoy hell with him and maybe had things his way for a change. But someone's gotta smack Trunks around and tell Gohan the pretty truths he needs to hear though he will forget them.

I simply leave offerings of blood roses and dry champagne, Belgian chocolate and freshest coffee at your feet, so that all good things may be yours and that as a humble, humble fan, I spread my adoration at your feet.

Write more! Please! And bring the original Vegeta back, in all his Hell King regalia!

Regards,
Zogeta
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From Xenshin on September 16, 2006
Hey Camaro. I re-read the first 2 chapters this morning. This is pure insanity. The macabe, the suffocating atmosphere, the blasphemy; I love it all. We spoke a lot about these things, and I'm still amazed by your ability to flesh out the abominable. Your descriptions of the grotesqueries and revolting behavior are unmatched in fandom, I've come to find. The sheer emotional impact you bring is reltentless and unnerves my senses. You have a way of ripping the reader out from their ass and into a bizarre spiral of another reality. I'm sure there are other authors that are very good in the sorry world of fandom, but hell, you really run with this. You're an inspiration. Hope to talk to you soon again.

X
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From ANON - Keiko on September 11, 2006
[forgive bad english, it is not my first language] I think that your work it is very good. The way you show your peoples' feelings is amazing and makes me want to read more. I have read all of your work on this site and think that you are one of the best writers on this website. I also like the way you captured the charactors from DBZ. You write them not like anyone I have read about before. It is very human and deep. I am look forward to reading more of your stories.
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From ANON - Dantanko on September 02, 2006
Ch 2 - A very unique way in recapping all that happened in the first Monster and what has happened after. Trunks's behaviour is indeed very, very cold. And the flow of the narrator's voice is very natural, thank goodness; you don't get that very often in stories.
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From ANON - Dantanko on September 02, 2006
Ch 1 - That was the most intense scene I have ever read, Internet or paperback. This started with an dark-romantic 19th century tone and delved quickly into a scene that would make the Marquis de Sade proud. Indeed, quite bold!
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