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Reviews for Lesser of Two Evils

By : Pixelgoddess

From ANON - LisaB (not logged in) on February 03, 2006
Finally got a few minutes to start this. Only got through chapter 1, but 'ness! *fans face* And what a fascinating setup! I know it's going to be interesting seeing how you make these two interact . . . vertically. :D
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From ANON - Macha on February 03, 2006
*SOBS* No, it didn't turn out well for the Son's at all. *sniffle* I always did wonder what would happen if Piccolo had been able to beat/kill Goku... I guess I'll find out in what remains of this excellently written A/U story.

*SOBS*
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From ANON - ~anz~ on February 03, 2006
Well no matter how many times I see it...the outcome's always the same: Goku is still stupid enough to stand in front of that blast!

And Piccolo blasts him!!! NUFF SAID!!

Heck it would have been fun to see his interaction with the rest of the bunch when they arrived, but hey... that's what dragonballs are for...! NOT!!!

Damn Piccolo...had no idea you were such a ... FREAK!!! [got off on his gettin' off]

The Dangerous Sexy Saiyans should have plenty of fun with him! He is a FREAK! Fiendishly so! Wow!!! To quote a famous song:

He's a super freak! a super freak! he's super freaky!!! Yeah!!

I see Piccolo is a practitioner of the FOUR F's....[oops! getting ahead of myself...more on this later...]

Excellent as always! ~_^!
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From SephyValentine on February 01, 2006
Hmmm, I really like this story so far. Well, I like Piccolo before Gohan's boy scout influence on him during his training. And of course, I love Raditz. They indeed do make a good match, in attitudes anyway.
You know, I always found that quite strange as well, how they go on in DBZ that Goku would never kill anyone, and he himself nags about not killing people, while it never bothered him in Dragonball. All of the Red Ribbon Army, the demons, Piccolo Sr., etc. Also that he even commits suicide to kill his brother, while he does everything he can to let Frieza stay alive. When he left Frieza there, and he even gave power up to him, I really thought "Okay, now I fucking don't get it anymore." Okay, sorry for the rant.
Anyway, great story and can't wait to see more of it. Keep it up!
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From ANON - ~anz~ on January 30, 2006
I really like this Piccolo calling them~especially Roshi~ the hippocrites that they are. And his reaction to Gohan's name ~RICE?!: PRICELESS!!!

Now for Goku: What fool is stupid enough to stand in one spot, hold his brother and allow his sworn enemy to fulfill his word and kill them while killing him? GOKU! That's who!

hmm...I wonder if he gets blowed up~as in shot full of holes~ this time?

[PG: In an insane moment a muse blew in my ear and I kinda sketched their encounter in chapter one. Soon as I get it scanned I'll send it to you...~_^!]
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From ANON - Macha on January 29, 2006
*covers eyes in dread* It didn't work out so well for Goku in the original time line when Piccolo really was being his ally. What's going to happen this time? AAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh..... I think he's bitten off more than he can chew. *sobs*

You've kept Radditz and Piccolo's characters very IC. I didn't realize how funny they were for villians.
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From ANON - ilex9 on January 28, 2006
hehe... Like Paul Harvey says..."and now the REST of the story." As usual superb writing. You pull pull off present tense which usually annoys me for some reason. I can see this becoming deeply disturbing... pull no punches.
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From Makota2112 on January 27, 2006
I've said it before, and I'll say it again...

I absolutely love this story!! Not only the characterization and storytelling but the entire concept! This is certainly going into my favs. I know you're busy but update when you get a chance, I have a feeling I'll be searching for this one on a regular basis.

Evil Piccolo rocks!

*happy dance*

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From ANON - ~anz~ on January 26, 2006
Luv it! LUV IT! LOVE IT!

Piccolo has always been a real bastard... and now someone has the balls to write it....

...and Radditz? THREE TIMES??? What a... bastard!

Damn, PG! I'm drooling already... I can't wait to read more!

~anz~

H O T ! ~ H O T ! ~ H O T !

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From ANON - Dania on January 26, 2006
I've been waiting for a good, and PLAUSIBLE version of this to come along for a while. I LOVE how you did this, and the characters weren't too OOC either- they were rather spot on. I absolutely love what you did with this, and if there is anymore to come- then I will relish the reading. I'd love to attempt some fanart of this for you ^^
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From ANON - Macha on January 26, 2006
Ah.... Piccolo certainly has lofty plans. 'I will rule.' To bad he not only has to worry about Goku fouling them up, now he has Radditz in his way.

Hmmmm Piccolo/Radditz... Never thought about, but I like the way you are writing it.

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