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By : WINTER19
  • From ANON - Shadow_Tears on November 11, 2006
    Aww, this storie's cute. I cant seem to read your other story though, it wont let me. *Pouts* You do OC's very good, some people cant really pull them off but you do it fantasticly. Your Bryan/Garland story seems like a good idea. Bryan's cute, Garland's cute, need i say more? If you like your story and want to publish it do it. As long as your satisfied with your work it dosnt really matter what others say. I empathise on your title problem it's tricky to find one that suits your story and dosnt seem lame or something. I'd sudgest it in another language. Like Latin or another. It'll catch your readers eye and will most likely sound good. Keep up the flow, your doing great.
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  • From ANON - PurpleKitten on February 07, 2006
    I really liked this chap! To few writes about Ian... Update soon, please? And Bryan better keep his promise! *growls* =) Keep the good work up!!
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  • From Might on February 05, 2006
    Sorry to write again but just to say the the top review is mine i was logged off some how. Weird. Oh yes i noticed something as well sorry to be like this little pointer person =p Anyways in the first chapter you typed POV but then you went with other two chapters in third person. Was that planned or we only plan on reading Robert's side by POV? Sorry if i sound like a dork pointing out the obvious or such. Anyways keep it going. ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2006
    Well this chapter was good. But i am a bit confused sorry to say, i mean the chapter made sense but how did we get where we are in the chapter? I am sorry i guess i am a freak when it comes to location even though i don't even write about locations. =P And about the other story you want to post I say go for it. My advice is just post up what you come up with don't be afraid and if you want to share it with everyone else then do it. Post it and feel good when others read it. ^^ That is how i started i just typed thought about it and well was going to ask if i should post it but decided to say "Hey what the hell just through it there and let ppl read and say what they think about my story." For some odd reason my entire review did not make sense to me. O_o I am easily confused. XD Well then keep the story going oh and i hope you come up with a title or maybe if you like to accept a title i might come up with one. Well update soon and post the other story okay? ^_^
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  • From ANON - M.J.Stone on February 04, 2006
    Well, I have reviewd all of your storys, and I'm very happy about, 'cause I did it in less in a hour(I'm a fast reading), and I'm good! :)
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  • From Might on February 03, 2006
    Well read it and i must say you are actually going off on a good start. I might say something though, i get this alot too from my comrades, but the description, you don't want to put that in all at once ya know. I mean there is nothing wrong when it comes to reading about a person's life and a good description but not to throw it in all at once. Maybe if you place the past in a seperate paragraph or get another character to question the relationship or explain about the past to the other character questioning. I hope that makes sense, but other then that the story is doing fine. So keep it up ^^
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  • From ANON - PurpleKitten on February 02, 2006
    I love this! Please update soon? *puppyeyes* Oh, and thanks for reviewing my fics! You make me so happy!
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  • From ANON - Liah on January 30, 2006
    Hey jsut like you said i read your fic too ^^ and i can say im glad i did, this is so interesting ^^

    I hope Robert finds his younger siblings ^^

    Liah xx
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