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Reviews for The Next Best Thing

By : fireun
  • From VampireHaku on December 08, 2007
    Ohhh this doesn't seem oveeerrr! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - SevenTreasures on April 25, 2007
    Yay~
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  • From ANON - Anise on April 04, 2007
    This is such a heartbreaking and difficult story but I just couldn't stop reading it because despite the difficult subject it's a really good story. The way that Havoc is going back and forth through all the different emotions such as wanting no one to touch him, to wanting to cling to Mustang was very telling. One other part that struck me was when Havoc kissed Mustang, getting to see his thoughts about him needing to be in control for once and be the aggressor was very insightful. I look forward to the rest of the story and seeing how it unfolds, I can't help but feel that by beating up Archer, Mustang played right into his hand.

    In case you didn't know you posted ch.12 twice, thought I should tell in case there's a ch.13 we should have gotten :)
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  • From nomdeplume on April 04, 2007
    I felt like cheering out when Roy got Archer in the groin. That was great. He definitely doesn't seem much like the knight in shining armor, but I think it works just the same, such a nice visual of Roy with his coat off and sleeves rolled up. I loved Havoc watching through the entire thing, cheering Roy on though his better judgement told him not to.
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  • From TrulyWished on April 03, 2007
    Uh oh. As charming as Archer getting his ass kicked is, what does the little bug have planned?
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  • From ANON - SevenTreasures on March 10, 2007
    Omfg, this is the sickest story i've ever read o.O and i absolutely FELL IN LOVE with it!!! Archer is very very VERY sadistic! My most favoritist lieutenant is being manhandled in the most vicious way possible and Roy looks like he's gonna take down all of Amestris if he doesn't kill Archer!
    Hoooooly, i am praying to my sex god right now for the next chapter. T.T Plz update asap? ^^
    ......Havoc's hot.
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  • From ANON - Reily on March 01, 2007
    I seriously think that Mustang needs to be smacked upside the head and Havoc should be the one to do it! Although it was nice to see Havoc show a little strength in ch.9, he just needs to remind himself that he's strong and will be able to deal with this. It was interesting to see he was still worried about leaving Mustang with Archer even after what had happened, so maybe the trust isn't entirely broken between the two. I really like the way that your dealing with this story and situation so far, it's not an easy topic so I can't wait to see what happens next :)
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  • From TrulyWished on February 27, 2007
    SOO awkward! Poor guys. But it's good that Jean realizes he isn't weak and doesn't have to take that kind of crap.
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  • From TrulyWished on February 26, 2007
    That's realyl fucked up. In a good way, certainly, and very well written. I'd forgotten about this one, I'm glad to see it continued.
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  • From speedofsound on February 20, 2007
    i haven't read many FMA fics, but wow... this story is really good. please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - Reily on December 18, 2006
    Honestly when it comes to stories like this I tend to click on it with one hand covering my eyes because they're just so hard to read. Also how a writer handles the situation after the incident is really important and so far I think you've handled that well. The part with the blood on the floor was very telling of how damaged Havoc is (and how cruel Archer is) and shows that this is not something that will be fixed in a short time.
    I must admit I was hoping Mustang would do a little more damage (like lighting Archer's hair on fire) especially after the things that Archer said, it'll be interesting to see what he has planned for him. I think now that Mustang knows the game Archer might be in for a rough time, at least I hope so! I admit I also want to see how Mustang helps Havoc but that could just be because they're my favourite pairing-can't wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - misslady on October 27, 2006
    This is a wonderful start for a dark story!! I love it!! Please continue soon! I look forward to reading more! Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - sweetsatincocoa on February 07, 2006
    That Archer is one sick fuck.
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  • From ANON - Kat on February 06, 2006
    Fine story...

    looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Renge on February 05, 2006
    Oh dear, don't you dare tos top here or I'll do something totally demented and Archerist. [smiles sadistically] So real so Havoc.
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