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By : Camaro
  • From Robyn on January 19, 2007
    O.O YIKES! That's just so messed up. Uh...I don't know what else to say...

    Evil Goku indeed!
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  • From Robyn on January 19, 2007
    Yeah...Vegeta was silly to think he could get away with that..that Goku would let him get away with it. Yikes.

    And now, where are we? O.o Yamcha thinks a gun is going to work on Goku?

    Interesting world you are describing. On to the next chapter.
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  • From xerosky on January 18, 2007
    Heh. For some reason the part I liked best about this chapter is the fact that Goku beat Vegeta into a pulp afterwards instead of following the yaoi cliche and turning into a weeping pile of injured uke. What else would he do?

    Can't wait to see how the threesome promised in your summary works out. I predict violence and angst. *happy grin*
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  • From Robyn on January 16, 2007
    Well...I read this chapter again, and it still disturbs me as much as it did the first time. Gods...what a horrible realization Goku must be going through....

    Won't say any more, don't want to ruin it for anyone else.

    Well done Camaro!
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  • From ANON - Zogeta on November 11, 2006
    After so many months so overwhelmed with varsity work and change and everything that comes with being a crack-headed wannabe writer, I said: "To hell with exams! Its good literature I seek!"

    And so, I tentatively came back to Camaro. The drug I nurtured two years ago and should have stayed with.

    I'm back! And I adore "Perfection". Back to the Saiyans that are Saiyan and not part human. Back to violence and passion all wrapped up in painfully magnificent prose.

    I'm so happy I found you again, Camaro. You are a Goddess amongst writers.

    I will be tracking this work most earnestly. You are truly brilliant.

    *goes off to read all the works here at aff.net*

    Humbly yours.
    Zogeta
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  • From ANON - chayron on June 05, 2006
    Chapter 1
    A whish. A self centered absolution for problems that I was too cowardly to handle on my own.
    I’m in love with this sentence. Really, we always wish to find a lamp with a genie and simply solve the problems. Now when I think… DBZ is based on that selfish solution of problems… O.o

    Oh, oh man. This is so intriguing. I’m so fond of paradoxes!
    I wonder what Goku has messed up… I have several ideas, but it’s so fun to guess!

    Chapter 2
    And what's the worst part? He knew it.

    Oh, I’m rather speechless… Such beautiful describing of Goku’s relations to Vegeta and Goku’s thoughts…

    Gohan, eight years old at the time, stood next to me, chattering on about things that, in his world, were the greatest contemplation of life yet seemed rather eccentric to me. Ideas of who he would be, his future job as an astronaut or fireman or all these terrific ideas that would probably never come true. It made me question whether I had ever explored the things that went through his mind or if, as I suspected, my concept of life in general would always pale in comparison to his own. His normalcy would forever isolate me as his father yet I had smiled down into his trustworthy eyes and knew that in that, I would find him fascinating.

    I envy you. I truly envy you. Such a great gift to put the feelings into words… I find it so difficult and yet you string the emotions into the text so beautifully and make me remember the times I stood and thought exactly the same as Goku...

    I actually began to even enjoy myself, laughing heartily when we bashed into each other, or when we caught glimpses of the star streaked sky as we floated on our backs. The cold wind over the stretch of the water chilled our skin as we floated, side by side, the only sound that of our breathing and the gentle movements of our arms to keep us up. […] "Vegeta," I breathed, moving my head just a bit to look at him. "Thanks."

    That was so…dunno, not even romantic. Something much deeper. Yes, Perfect, is the word. Loved it.

    I saw you have much more of this on other sites. But yeah, I also like reading here :D So, please, please, update soon!

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  • From ANON - Macha on June 04, 2006
    *drools* Although this chapter started out rocky with Goku reflecting about his marriage and how different he was from almost every one he knew, it ended pleasingly.

    I wonder how far Vegeta will take this? How far Goku will let him take this before guilt comes crashing in.
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  • From ANON - Kat on May 26, 2006
    Mmmm... another chapter, and a yummy one too^-^!! I think this is one of the first chapters I have ever read of yours that I thought was funny AND sexy.

    "We...." He breathed sexually. "Soak."

    LMAO!! That one line just sets the entire mood for that whole encounter between Vegeta and Goku. I also love how easily you transitioned from the more serious beginning of the chapter into that light, easy encounter. It really helped me see how Goku actually feels about his life. The more serious part mirrors how much he really has come to dislike his time at home, whereas the lighter end shows his desire to be free with Vegeta.

    I also loved two fragments of this chapter. The first one is: "But I'm being unfair. I guess it's easier to look back and say she was a selfish, cold person. It is. She's my scapegoat, my personified justification for adultery." How absolutely great of you to remind us of Goku's "humanity" and of our own as well. Everyone needs to blame something other than ourselves. Even if we know we are guilty as well, there always needs to be something else in there too so we can sleep at night.

    The other fragment that I adored was "He could strip away the clothing and flesh and muscle and tissue and leave me bare with but one glance. And what's the worst part? He knew it." This one I enjoyed simply because it made me laugh. I don't know whose personality shows more here, your's or Vegeta's, but I find it funny all the same.

    Well, I suppose that's all for now. I was so glad to see that you had updated :) Oh, and while looking at "Hardy Har", I decided to help the self-promo a little bit. I hope you don't mind, it's likely no one will see it anyways. Later!!

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  • From ANON - Kat on May 13, 2006
    Hey, this site's working okay now!! I have been trying to review the latest chapter of SH for forever, but I haven't been able to. I'm now going to see if I can. I also have to look for more of Monster 2. Good grief, I cannot believe how long this site has been down. Anyway, I love the idea you have started for this story. How absolutely perfect!! Without Vegeta, Goku is a tyrant. I wonder who will be the good that fights him? Well, I'm going to go to SH now. Later... :)
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  • From ANON - Macha on May 06, 2006
    WHOOOOT! You got this story going here! YAY. I am going to leave this review short. Mwuahahahahahha, I have my reasons.
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