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Reviews for Perfection

By : Camaro
  • From ANON - JM on January 05, 2014
    I really REALLY hope this gets updated someday. I've been reading your stories since 2004, and I don't know if you even check this profile anymore or not, but I never tire of your writings. Everything is just...just so--GAH! It's like being catapulted into a new world, one where TRULY anything can happen, and you do it with one of the most unexpected fandoms. You take a simple series and turn it into a complex masterpiece. I'm rambling now, but seriously, I just had to get on and review once more how much I love everything you've done and tell how much it has affected me as a writer and a person.
    Hope all is well,

    JM
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  • From ANON - OYM on April 22, 2013
    I love the way that you bring DBZ characters into deep human emotions and issues. I have only recently gotten into fan-fiction; some are worth reading and some aren't. Yours are, so I thank you. I hope you're still writing.
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  • From darkstar7789 on January 02, 2012
    Please let there be more chapters. There's just so many twists and turns with your fic that I am utterly dumbfounded right now. Kakarrot, Goku, and Vegeta irritate me greatly, but this only hooks me in deeper. I NEED to find out what happens next. The morbid descriptions are still as eye catching as ever. There are so many questions I need to ask, but I believe reading on is the only way they can ever truely be answered. Wonderful job with the writing. I do hope you continue to update your works. (I'm a fan) The instability of the minds of your characters is absolutely enchanting. The human condintion is something that's always been pondered over, and anyone who's willing to express their own without fear of backlash is someone I can admire. Can't wait for the rest, if you plan to continue, of course. :) *hugs, blood, and chocolate*
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  • From ANON - sassynu on November 29, 2009
    where is the rest of the story, OMG so many plot twists I was so captivated edge of my seat awe struck by the boldness for one of this story, and yet it's to be expected of a Dragonball fic so much blood and gore you writers are crazy but crazy in a good way I love the way it was written with Goku telling his story and the different way the two Goku's thought it was great so awesome and so much truth behind it I'd hate to say it but I agree with Kakarot so much is wrong with the world and it'd be nice for some change but not that much change. The story was funny it was intense dramatic sexy, you know I didn't know Goku had that much sex appeal but you really brought it out i loved it!! I hope I get to know the rest of his story I'm hoping for a happy ending but I'll take anything. You have to finish, this story ROCKS!!!!
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  • From Robyn on April 22, 2009
    I'd forgotten how insane this Kakarott is. O.o
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  • From ANON - grimesxxx on April 01, 2009
    ok this story started out awesome and had my interest all the way to chapter 21,im sorry but that was a major let down,you cant be serious if that is your idea of a ending,i mean come on,for that you shouldnt have even posted the damn story
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  • From MasterOfThebes on February 25, 2009
    from the very start of this story you captured me..this has to be one of the best yaoi's ive ever read..but please tell me are you planning on finishing this story or are you going to leave it on a cliffhanger? anything you decide to do is cool..because the story itself is just "perfection"..
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2008
    Just a reminder that we all still look forward to your updates.

    Everyday.
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  • From Zofo on July 22, 2008
    Thanks for continuing as I thought it was the end last chapter!

    I was really hoping Vegeta would see through Kakarot, after all the clues were there, but sadly he didn't until it was too late and he'd let his guard down. Pity.

    So Kakarot has Vegeta as well now, how will they get out of this? Maybe they won't leaving Kakarot to rule the universe.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2008
    Ahhhh!

    The wait is killing me.
    I'm stuck on the edge of my seat!!!!


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  • From CrimsonTide on July 16, 2008
    Eeee!! That was entirely too short! I'm glad you finally updated though ^.^ So wow... Vegeta has fallen victim to Kakarotto was well.... If things weren't bad before, they certainly are now. I wonder what Kakarotto's plans are now that he has TWO Saiyajins at his disposal.

    I hope you continue this. I can think of a million different ways this fic can go, and I'm itching to see which path you take.
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  • From ANON - pleyade on June 25, 2008
    please tell me that you do not leaved this story!
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  • From ANON - rilakkuma on March 22, 2008
    i kinda hoped that would be the end though. makes me feel like bad person for some reason. :x

    part of me hopes there's going to be a 'happy' ending. and by happy i mean most the suffering will come to an end. i might be naive but not that naive.
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  • From Camaro on February 01, 2008
    Ok guys, let's not be RUDE or anything. No, of course that's not the end of the story. Pfft.
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  • From ANON - Chloe on January 31, 2008
    Eh? That can't be the end, can it? But predictable Vegeta is boring! And that's a boring ending. You should make it exciting. =)

    (But YAY for updating!!! So... How 'bout those other stories...?)
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