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By : darkcrimson
  • From ANON - vanya on January 09, 2009
    Gerland and Brayen...
    This is the exactly of mistake that make me wonder if author care about they story or the reader.

    If you cannot bother writting the name of your character the right way, I would not bother reading your story.
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  • From gadgetman77 on September 07, 2008
    Aww please continue soon! this story had me hooked from the begginning!
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  • From ANON - Crossy on September 07, 2008
    Awsome fic, keep them coming !


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  • From Aleksxia on April 24, 2008
    so far this story is good , but your english is well... theres alot of errors ... anyways i still love your story !! haha
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  • From ANON - Minna on April 24, 2008
    Awesome story. Hope you continue writing more, most of the people just leave their stories mid-way which is annoying and sad too. Good luck with the rest of it.
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  • From ANON - angel_g on April 22, 2008
    first of all: Thank you for updating!! been wanting to read this for some time now. ^^
    and second. I don't know what to say.. this chapter was so sad I cried through the entire thing.
    I love the way you write, it makes the characters and the scenes seem so real. Don't ever stop!
    and I can't wait for next update :D
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  • From ANON - Laila on April 05, 2008
    Hey :)

    It's a brilliant story, so I hope you will update soon. and of course get your personal thing fixed.
    I know how had it can be, if your life isn't in order.


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  • From ANON - July on January 31, 2008
    hello, i vote for another chapter because the story is so interesting.


    bye




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  • From Hoshisaki on December 31, 2007
    I'd like another chapter! *__*
    Take you time! ^^

    BeyBye!
    R-chan
    aka Hoshisaki
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  • From YuFu on December 29, 2007
    awww man...when are you gonna get to the good stuff? lol. i guess im just anticipating a gettogether that won't be happening for a while yet. -sigh- when will they realize that they REALLY like eachother? and whats the deal with the change in personality with the gang? was it meant to be that vague? i mean i got the hint that it had to deal with Biovolt...but...eh watever, im sure you'll clarify. continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2007
    doh... too bad you can't work on it.. it would soooo nice to read the continue on this fic ^^ i really and i mean really like it. *sigh*

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  • From ANON - vitality on December 27, 2007
    hy, my vote:

    i want another chapter, please!!!

    bye
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  • From ANON - Vampire Brat on October 06, 2007
    Interesting chapter. About your question of whether you should write what happened to Bryan in the next chapter or in a oneshot. I was thinking, maybe you can have it for like later in the story when Rei starts finding out about BioVolt and all that. Well, just a suggestion.
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  • From ANON - Dr3 Dr3 on September 08, 2007
    hey hey hey...
    yaya!!! an update...
    i must say, this was one of the best chappies you have written sooo far!!!
    the BryanXTala sence was sooo sad and ...
    it's sooo perfect!!!!
    and Rei is sooo cute

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2007
    aaww to bad that you won't update for a while.. kai really needs to stop being such a b*tch ^^ even though he's awesome :P
    the scene with tala and bryan was sad and cute. keep up the good work
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