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Reviews for Smoldered Gold

By : WithoutAWord
  • From ANON - Onyxlight on August 06, 2006
    This was a great start hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - Ameela on May 24, 2006
    Man, I had tears in my eyes reading this.
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  • From ANON - kathryn on May 01, 2006
    hi um that was really good but what you said about not being able to make more parts you could turn it into a yaoi and say how roy learned of what happened and noticed that ed was still affected by it andd he tries to console him but ends up falling in love with him and to end you could say that roy returned the spark to al's eyes... just a suggestion but i think that you could do it... i'm not so much a complete story wrighter but i can give you some more ideas if you want.. littlekatiecat@yahoo.com or kathrynbaker2002@yahoo.com.... i really think that you should do more.... your choice though... awesome job!!!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on April 25, 2006
    omg that was awsome. Please you have to come up with a plan and finish. YOU MUST DAMN YOU!!!!!
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