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By : Pixelgoddess
  • From Beanies on July 29, 2007
    this is absolutely splendid! i really enjoyed reading it. goku, vegeta, and the others were kept in character so well. there was no pretentious dialogue, superfluous use of adverbs (that really rubs me the wrong way, though i'm guilty of it sometimes...), and you actually made goku pitiful without making him some pathetic, frail angel! he was so weak, i felt sorry for him, but i was happy to see that he still had some fight in him. the bit with picollo carrying him over the shoulder was hilarious! i love how you've handled the characters. i IMpatiently await more! :D
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  • From Achillona77 on June 17, 2007
    Kakarott even blamed himself for his sons’ deaths – like it was his fault for being a Saiyan. Vegeta had gone through the same pain, and understood, but he had no real regrets – Trunks had been one of the best things in his life. How could any of them have foreseen that the cost of their phenomenal strength was the rapid burn-out of their all-too-human bodies? At least he could sympathize with his mate in this – and remind him that as a full-blooded Saiyan this child would not suffer the same fate.

    ~~this says much..tells the story of what happened to their kids and explains why Kakarott is soo upset. And Vegeta has his quirks and fears too... yes you are truly the Mistress of Mayhem... Angst is everywhere... and if anything happens to either of them the other will truly be left alone...

    that would make an interesting side story ...or chapter...the loss of their sons...but that paragraph said it all...

    LOVE IT!!!!!^_^

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  • From ANON - Irol on June 15, 2007
    oh yay, its been a long time since i've seen this. either i've been out of the loop or there have been no updates. it was a great chapter!
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  • From fyrbyrd074 on June 15, 2007
    Oh I wanted Kakrott to wake up... As always, Love it!
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  • From Robyn on June 15, 2007
    YAY!!! They are finally TALKING! GAH! I think I might know some of Piccolo's frustration with the situation. hehehehe, I'd have carried Goku to Vegeta also. :P

    Excellent chapter Pix!
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  • From Salza on April 16, 2007
    How did I miss this story? You've handled a very complicated situation in a deep, touching way...plausibly, too. I'm loving the love triangle, and I really hope you don't abandon it in future chapters; it's a rare complexity that I don't get to see a lot of anymore. I love this story for that reason; so many complications dealth with so well, and so much attention given to character.
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  • From Salza on April 16, 2007
    I'm not usually a Vegeta/Goku fan, but this was beautifully handled...I really enjoyed the awkwardness, the patience...and the use of that required line at just the right spot.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2006
    i loved it are you gonna write more chapters i wonder what the baby will look like
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on November 23, 2006
    Very, Very well written chapter! That totallt caught me off guard with Piccolo, what a twist! I hope the two Saiyans have an eisier time with each other! I love this fic, please keep it up! :)
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  • From ANON - grawr kasie on November 17, 2006
    That was adorable. Smexi too. Please update as soon as possible. I'll be waiting! ^^
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on November 08, 2006
    hi there,

    it´s a good story and i especially like the explanation, why vegeta didn´t say that he "loves" kakarott.
    i would even say, that it´s a little bit philosophycally in a way if i thought about it.

    so keep it in on. ^^
    take care.
    greetings, Bijou :3
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 07, 2006
    wow im glad goku know where him and vegeta stand..hopefully everything will start to look up
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 07, 2006
    Ah, Piccolo...I wonder if that was really what he had in mind the whole time, or if he had a back up plan? Either way, it turned out the best for Goku and Vegeta, and yes, Piccolo is correct, until Vegeta got to the point he wasn't thinking about it any more, the prince wouldn't have said anything.

    Excellent chapter Pix!
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on November 07, 2006
    Happy little fyre, glad to see more... but 12 months! I thought nine was too much!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2006
    “I’m asexual, you ass. I’m not going to have sex with anyone.”
    Hilarious I love Piccolo!
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