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Reviews for Spiral

By : Robyn
  • From ANON - Ana on October 28, 2013
    This is one of the best GxV fanfiction I've ever read. Mixing SM with DBZ is a brilliant idea considering how strong these men are. They can take quite a bit of pain-but then in the end it was too much even for them. Macha found their limits and made this very long fanfiction a hell of a ride.

    Third time reading and I feel my skin tickling like it was the first first. Thank you for writing!
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  • From ANON - bitemeslowly on April 07, 2011
    Mann..I LOVE this story..you are an amazing writer. I found this story on pixelgoddess' page..n it wasn't finished on there..so I was so excited when I found it on here. yay! I can't wait for the next part..my f**ked up lil prince..wow..how sexy! Damn this story is sooo good..I haven't read the whole thing yet bc I've got to go to class..but I'm so excited to finish it :D You're such an amazing writer..the way the words flow..n set a perfect picture in my head is awesome. So very awesome! I can't really find words to describe how good this is..I mean it's beyond awesome..n anyone who says otherwise..is an idiot. lol So, just keep up the wonderful work :D
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  • From IuvenesL on July 12, 2009
    This is another one of those fics that I read when I was new to the fandom, before I had anything like name recognition going on, and before I started bookmarking the ones I liked. At the time, it definitely squicked me a bit, but it stuck in my head. I've always seen Goku and Vegeta as having a bit of sadomasochistic relationship, for obvious reasons, but as I've been writing my own stuff, I keep getting just a little bit more extreme with it, and when I do, I'm often reminded of this fic (that I could never remember the name of!) So, quite happy to find it again, and to discover after all this time that it was one of yours all along. :D

    I didn't care much for the scene with Kakarot, but it was fascinating, so I kept reading....and wow...watching Goku come to grips with what he had done, and the fact that Vegeta wanted it, and then watching him come up with the nerve to do it himself - THAT'S FUCKING HAWT! I thought I was going to gasm when Goku started breaking Vegeta's fingers! Sick, I know....

    I already read the sequel (just now - I hadn't read it before, for some reason - squick?) but I commented here, because IMO, the magic is here.

    Love you Macha!
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  • From ANON - rdk on June 30, 2007
    Wow. That was rough. I'll admit this took me longer than I thought to read because I had to break every now and then and come back.

    Vegeta is the little masochist here isn't he. And who would have imagined Kakarott would be so good at analyzing the situation. A little more than Vegeta bargained for I do believe. I so want to hate Vegeta for what he's done, but I can't. I'm not sure why, but I can't And I feel so bad for Goku. He's lost everything.

    It wasn't an easy read for me, but it was a very good story. On to the second part.
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  • From KnightSun on June 21, 2007
    Amazing work, as usual Macha darling. I look forward to reading the next installment. Also, i need your help reviewing the last chapters for poisoned hearts. I finnaly finished it and i just need the chapers read over.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2006
    Hot sex on a stick. So hot it brought tears to my eyes. Macha, you are my goddamn hero. This is one super hot fic. Do you think you could pull off an incest version? Goku and Gohan Maybe?
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  • From on September 17, 2006
    Awsome first part of the story, can't wait to see the 2nd part of this series! :D
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on August 30, 2006
    Wow O.O

    I've just finished reading the whole thing...and wow. You pulled this off pretty damn well O_O

    *waits for sequel/has nothing really interesting to say*
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  • From ANON - Vegetachik7 on August 27, 2006
    Applause!! Great story. It is really quite amazing and I'll be looking forward to the second part. Great writing as usual and wonderful in-depth look on the characters. I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Irol on August 26, 2006
    aw im sad that its over, but i can't wait for the next one! vegeta really has some issues to deal with, but it gives the story a good twist. i'll be checking for the next one!
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  • From Makota2112 on August 26, 2006
    You know reading this story in my parent's kitchen was quite the challenge...but I made it all the way through! Well worth it! I really enjoyed this fic. I'm not a huge Goku/Vegeta fan but the way you write pain made me take the plunge. Very well done. Kudos.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on August 20, 2006
    Wonderful. I love the presentation in your story. The feelings and thoughts of the characters are so tangeble. I lood forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - vegetachik7 on August 18, 2006
    Ohhh..this story is too good, haha. I really like it and I really really like the conflicts in both saiyajins. As Goku had said before "Vegeta is one sick freak." The poor abused guy is so...confused. It's sad that his past tormenting has led him to this dangerous obsession and it's even sadder that Goku is dragged into it! Well...again an awesomely detailed and descriptive chapter. I can't wait for the next! Great stuff!
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  • From ANON - Irol on August 18, 2006
    wow this is getting deeper and deeper, vegeta really is messed up eh? can't wait for more! yeah im a greedy freak.
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  • From ANON - Saiyan_Bride on August 11, 2006
    Wow! My words of praise would suffer in comparison to your writing style. Loving the squicky masochistic nature and the bare gruesome tones this fic has to offer. Even I was cringing at some points, but it adds wonderfully to the affect. I love the blunt honesty Vegeta has when describing his lusts for a violent domination and the in-depth way you named all the bones and joints as they came into play. You certainly know your biology!
    An absolute must for updating!
    Eagerly awaiting future chapters.
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