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Reviews for Dark Nightmares

By : FireCracker
  • From ANON - veggiefan2 on September 04, 2006
    Gosh how cute at the end! I loved it. Please write more like it I love the grammar and proper language your a very good writer and you should be proud. I hope to see more of your work.

    Ja'ne.
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  • From ANON - veggiefan2 on September 04, 2006
    "What the hell?!" the tall saiyan glared. "You think this is feeding
    time at the zoo, Bulma? YOU STUPID BI-"

    Your funny too. I like this story and I like where it is going. You crack me up. Your so damn funny! You make Goku sound like a crackhead. I love it when he curses. Goku is halarious I can actually picture him saying something like that. I hope you have something good for him to say to ChiChi.
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  • From ANON - veggiefan2 on September 04, 2006
    I just read the beggining of this chapter and I am so pleased that you make Goku want to hurt ChiChi. Its beautiful Im gald he sees how annoying she is even when hes normal. Please commence with killing her, or making everyone hate her. That would be really great. But now I will continue on with the story.
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  • From ANON - veggiefan2 on September 04, 2006
    Me again Jesus this story is hot!!!!! Needless to say I loved the part when Trunks desired th ahve both Goku and Vegeta. Please create a sequel where Goku and Vegeta go into rut and Trunks goes with them a story with Trunks and Vegeta together if you know what I mean. Please make the effrrt to try.

    Ja'ne.
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  • From ANON - Veggiefan2 on September 04, 2006
    ChiChi is one ANNOYING bitch. I hate her she thinks shes so special. She thinks she can help but she cant she such an annoying harpy bitch. She is lieka pesty nuisance that wont go away. Ever. I hope Goku kills her and nobody cares. She is really pissing me off because she thinks her greatest gift is sparing Gohan and Goten from rut. She a nobody. She thinks shes helping Goku with his problem but hardly. Goku has moved on to hotter things like Vegeta and Trunks. I hate that Harpy and I hope Goku really messes her up in the next chapter. Other than that your story is GREAT!!!!!! You remind me of an author, I cant remember her name but your almost as good as her. You really have me going on this one, I hope you write more like these, but If I can make a request. If I can please email me at: http://veggiefan2k4@yahoo.com please!
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  • From ANON - encanto on June 28, 2006
    I really enjoyed reading this story from Golden Dreams all the way to the very end. It was intriguing and I couldn't stop reading! Another great story to your awesome collection! ^_^
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on May 30, 2006
    love it
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