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Reviews for Unravelled

By : hidebehindaname
  • From RedEvilEmpress on January 19, 2007
    I like it.
    Short-ish, but for this type, a decent length. And well-written.
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  • From ANON - d on August 20, 2006
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  • From Trinity7 on July 24, 2006
    Wow, this is really good. Very sexy, and you characterized Lust well. I like how you ended it with Envy finding her.

    ~Trinity
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  • From ANON - Kat on July 08, 2006
    *whoa*.. that was hot. It actually really bothered me in the series that "Lust" never seemed to be particularly lustful.. this was a really great answer to that particular question-- I really loved the way you painted Lust's character. As with the rest of your stuff, I really loved this fic.. keep 'em coming!
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  • From Shaellin on July 07, 2006
    I thought it a shame that such a well-written PWP about Lust had no reviews yet, so here's one from me.

    I found Lust's performance very erotic and quite in-character. An insightful look into a character whose full potential was sadly frustrated by the show's refusal to delve into sexual issues despite its willingness to flirt with issues of violence and gore.

    I did find the references to Wrath, Sloth and Greed to be a tad confusing, but then the story seems to be set well before the Elric Brothers made the scene so I suppose that must have something to do with it.

    Overall I give this story high marks. Short but satisfying. Two thumbs up. :)
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