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Reviews for Well they had to be doing something

By : DarkMassacre
  • From ANON - Camaro on June 04, 2006
    What? What is this?

    What have you done? Come here!

    ::grabs author's face and slaps it into story::

    This is gross!

    “Unless you wanted me to fuck you, Nappa.”

    ::makes disgusted face:: I don't care what either one of those bastards wants, this is like.....dog porn or something. I think I just dropped something in my pants that's more entertaining to look at than this.

    “I’ll take you, Vegeta.”

    Glad we were sure to spice up the dialogue. This is like ... hearing Yamcha say "Wolf Fang Fist" in a yaoi story.. it just gives ya a good case of the "yucks".

    ::shakes head::

    God damn that's gross. You write really well though! hahha

    Camaro
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