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By : lare
  • From AmoraPyra on November 05, 2008
    i liked this story. it was really good. just wanted you to know.
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  • From ANON - Duo Maxwell on September 08, 2006
    Hello :D I just wanted to tell you that Yaoi is Boy /Boy LOVEING and if you made Duo a Girl which I don't know why you would want to cut off his pretty man hood for and give him breasts and a womanhood but whatever anyways if your going to do that! Change his sexy sex to a Female then it should be labeled as not Yaoi. But Just M/F Heterosexual stuff bal bal you know what I mean because it is confuzzy when you have M/F then Yaoi because Yaoi is male/ male sometimes it means they are just dating then after that they slam there bodies down and wind them alllll around hehe. Sorry listing to music while I type this any ways I am sure the story is good I started reading it thinking you made a mistake saying it was M/F with Yaoi next to it then I was not mistaken because Duo is a girl in this story which I guess is ok But Man I love Duo's Penis @_@ how can I say that!!!!! I have never even met the guy like I ever would LOL snicker how can I meet a Cartoon carry!!!! Maybe in my dreams that is it right Duo Maxwell can be real in my dreams! Wow your probably wondering why I am still typing you probably think I don't have anything better to do then to write a really long post. BUT the thing is I am very long winded and I was really only typing to tell you about the Yaoi on the summery hehehe.

    Kirby Dance!!!
    Wow ok well anyways that is all LOVE YOU all even if you did chop off Duo Penis though I know he does not really have a penis because he is not real! @_@ But anyways mhmm ok right I am done I think yes done like cookies in a oven....

    Peace Out
    Duo Maxwell The first and the last
    P.S. I am not obessed with DUO @_@ hehehee that is such a lie Laughs!1 right DUO? Duo: Yup that is a lie and now I have to spank you for lieing "No NO please!" Duo: Nope to late" takes lier and spanks ass Screams *secratly likes it* @_@ No NO I am not obessed Duo: Stop lieing !!! Shut up ahhhhhhhhhh runs away Duo: You can run but you can't hide!
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  • From ANON - maxwell16 on June 21, 2006
    wow this is good i have read lots with Duo being a girl and most of them are crap but this rocks!!!!!!
    keep it up plz
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  • From ANON - Alexokerry on June 14, 2006
    This is an interesting story, but the typos, spelling errors and grammerical problems make it very difficult to read. There are the bones of a good storyline here, but you need a Beta. The site offers some of the best betas that I've ever seen and they can help you with the rought spots in your writing.

    Just remember, even the most famous of authors use a Beta and/or an editor to help them improve their work.

    I can't wait to see where you take this.
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  • From ANON - Sugargirl on June 13, 2006
    Hey, I like where you are going with this, and I don't mean to sound like a critic but you really should revise your work. I know this is your first GW fic, but you have alot of spelling errors and the dialogue is a bit too short, and it just sounds like the characters are reading from a script. but keep going though, you just might have something here.
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