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Reviews for Tease

By : TrulyWished
  • From AliceMina on July 13, 2007
    Nice story!
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  • From ANON - SunaTenshi on November 06, 2006
    O_oO_oO_oO_oO_oO_o

    very good!! please write a follow-up chapter!!please!!

    >^.^
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  • From ursweetheartless on October 22, 2006
    i knew i'd read this before, and i almost didnt click, but i was pretty boerd so i did and now im wicked glad because that was pretty damn hot and awesome, and so in character. im not sure if i remember how the other one was worse, but this is definitly solid now.
    *sends love*
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  • From ANON - Trista on September 30, 2006
    This is a lemon, not a lime. you seemed confused at the top as to which it was. a lime has kissing and possibly second base. If it's something that a person under 18 cannot legally view, it's a lemon. Any variations for the names of sexual organs fall into that catagory, and a scene where someone has an orgasm is automatically rated X, a lemon. Under the shirt touching is lime, exposure of breasts and defined as lemon. IE, no children under 18 allowed according to the internet porn law.

    This story is kinda cute. I liked the flirting idea, except where you had to explain the only things that kept Ed from flirting with the whole office, meaning that he had tried before, because that made him come off looking slutty. Ed is rather modest by nature as far as looks goes. talent he'll flaunt, but he's kinda self-conscious when it comes to anyone besides Al touching him i've noticed in the manga. Even Ling freaks him out a little.

    But the writing is good. :)
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  • From ANON - naomi on September 24, 2006
    hi! Thank you for reviewing my fic. I just got into Ed/Roy, thank you for writing that:D I will read the others ya did too.
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  • From ANON - Me on July 26, 2006
    Awesome. Very well written.
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  • From ravengirl76 on July 20, 2006
    You so totally cater to my FMA OTP. *grin* Keep producing the Roy/Ed slash, and I'll be one very happy girl.
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  • From ANON - Kagome on July 04, 2006
    A little short. I would advise a little more detail in it all, stretching it out. LOVE ROY AND ED!! (Perfect for each other if you ask me) Love the story, hope to read more from you!!
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  • From ANON - KousukeAsazuki on June 26, 2006
    So nice....you just love torturing Ed, don't you? Well, I know how it feels to want to torture a cute little bishie. My torture is usually dark and sadistic, though... er, anyway... good job, once again!
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