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By : TrulyWished
  • From ANON - milky on August 02, 2006
    Aww...in a certain light, I'm glad Roy left them for a bit - it gives the boys some time to grow up without him as a father-figure, and now that he needs help, he and Ed can be on more even footing. Though I'll admit, a part of me wants to see Roy/Al here too XD; Also, it's so sad for poor Ed - the way you wrote the sex between them, the reader can really see and wince at the prior abuse :( Glad he's finally had enjoyable sex.
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on August 02, 2006
    This is such a good story, original idea, good characterization, pretty much everything. Thank you for the fast updates, too.
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  • From ANON - tar21 on August 02, 2006
    OMG... o_o. You are officially a GOD. I shall worship you for the rest of my life. Your fic just gets better and better and the suspense... damn it's killing me by slowly melting my brains *damn nose bleeding again*
    Please update before I run out of blood. ;D

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  • From ANON - Juna on August 02, 2006
    OMG!!! So short but ack i am dying to know what shall happen now!! I call that an evil cut off evil! Great chapters i loved them all and i cannot wait to read what will happen next. Update soon =3
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  • From ANON - milky on August 02, 2006
    I am so glad that Roy didn't take advantage of Ed :( And noooo, Roy, don't go off to war! *hopes the Elrics fix themselves and go haul his ass back*
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  • From ANON - cuylerjade on August 01, 2006
    Oh! Poor Roy! Poor boys! What will they do? Will they sit idly by and wait for Roy to come home? Or will Ed take the State Alchemist test and go find the man he loves? Oh, the trauma! *sniff, sniff* I LOVE IT! Thank you so much for the updates. I anxiously await more, so please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Lisa on August 01, 2006
    Aaaahhhhhhhhhhhh, you titled that chapter "leaving" because you were leaving "faithful readers" on the edge of a cliff. Damn, that was good. I hope you keep writing forever!
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  • From ANON - michelle sanders on August 01, 2006
    sorry i haven't left a review for awhile, i've been grounded :( this isn't the end right? you still are going to do a lemon for us? oh i put my last name because there is an author on here whose name is michell.
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  • From ANON - Jessy-chan on July 31, 2006
    Hey!How are you?Iam reviewing (is that right?) Just because I wanna tell you that you are doing a nice job!I am really enjoying!!Ed and Al are adorable and I can't wait for the next chapter!So!Congrats!!And sorry my bad english...I am braizilian.Ok Bye Jessy
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  • From ANON - asmodes red gold on July 31, 2006
    My gawd this has got to be one of the best fma royxed stories i've read so far. I love it!
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  • From ANON - Juna on July 31, 2006
    Awww so cute! Kittens how cute! Oh man both Ed and Al are so cute, them playing like little kids, so cute loved this chapter! Update soon =3
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  • From ANON - milky on July 30, 2006
    Awww, the Elrics get matching coats...and kittens! I like how they can still be children sometimes, the games they play are both childish and interesting at the same time :)

    *clings to for more*
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  • From ANON - milky on July 30, 2006
    Awww...I'm glad to see some time has passed, to let Ed become used to the routine and grow more trusting of Roy. I like how he's slowly started to talk, and how he's still very much damaged by his past experiences.
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  • From ANON - milky on July 30, 2006
    Awww, poor silent Edward is starting to come out of his shell :) It's probably a good sign that he's growing more and more spunky. And LOVE for Roy taking down the bastard who was messing with Ed!
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  • From ANON - milky on July 30, 2006
    Awww, these two are adorable!!! I want to pull them close and squeeze them :O I also like how poor Roy is really really out of his league. They are so very talented ;_; LOVE FOR YOU!
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