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By : TrulyWished
  • From ANON - Ri on July 20, 2006
    And he has been founded. Oh wow i was like "OMG!" heh heh but glad Roy found out and he didn't really freaked out. Roy is so nice,i love how you portray him in your sotry. ^o^ Okay can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work. ^_^ Update soon!
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  • From ANON - anonymouse on July 19, 2006
    Aww, the secret had to come out sometime! Glad they got this over with early. And I like him establishing ground rules for Ed, that he doesn't have to trade sex for anything. Poor kid, he's gotta be so fucked up :(

    One thing I thought you might clarify, have Roy give a nod to the fact that these are abused kids - setting rules is certainly important, cause it makes life feel normal again, but at the same time you'd think he could acknowledge the fact that you know, they aren't exactly used to being treated like people. They hid Ed's gender because they were trying to go along with what they thought he wanted...and he is trying to emphasize specifically that he is disappointed they didn't trust him enough to talk with him, yes?
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  • From ANON - cuylerjade on July 19, 2006
    I really like this story! Angst!Ed. My fav! (Combined with RoyxEd it makes it perfect!!)

    Now, on a slightly less giddy note, I really like how you have managed to make this story progress. It flows really well and seems to be put together very well. It's not too choppy or too wordy.

    I do wonder, though, is Ed going to talk to Roy in the forseable future? I'm glad that he knows that Ed is a boy, though. (Whew! About time!!) :)

    Keep going - I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on July 19, 2006
    yay! al has a body! well a metal one anyway. wonder how roy is gonna react when he's told that the elrics were a pair of brothers. i foresee loud screams and things being thrown in the next update. j/k. see ya next time.
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  • From ANON - Juna on July 19, 2006
    Hey i love this story so even though there is not smut or anything big like that it does not bug me cause this story is good and cute at the same time. Weeee can't wait for the update.
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  • From ANON - michelle on July 18, 2006
    i really like this story. how is roy going to react when he finds out tammy is a he?
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on July 18, 2006
    This is so good. I can hardly wait for Roy to find out that "Tammy" is actually a boy. The pacing of this fic is good. You don't give too much away at once, but it still holds my interest. Also, thanks for the frequent updates.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on July 18, 2006
    To my utter delight I see another chapter of Housework! Yippee

    "Roy got a glare when he didn't interfere and felt it was best to give a lecture as well, except his was more along the lines of don't get caught. As a reward for his wonderful parenting skills, Roy got extra paperwork that afternoon and had to leave his door open to ensure no slacking." - Oh that was so funny and clever as well and soooo like a man.

    Read your bio - it's hard to believe you've been writing for a few months, you obviously have a gift. Thanks for sharing!

    P.S. "original" in quotations IS a good thing!
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  • From ANON - milky on July 18, 2006
    Aha, and the plot thickens! I like how Roy is in fact checking up on their background, and how Al feels bad about lying, and how Ed is slowly starting to warm up. Also like that Roy is being less of a bastard - he's actively considering "Tammy"'s feelings now (giving her personal space and so on). And well, as long as he keeps feeding them noodles and books, it looks like they're on the road to recovery...

    *is eagerly awaiting the day when Roy finds out Ed's true gender :O*
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  • From ANON - Lisa on July 17, 2006
    Another good chapter (5). Wonder what's going to happen now that Al has a body? I really like your "original" idea story. Caon't wait to see how it plays out. Thanks for the quick update. As for housework - now I gotta go do mine.
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  • From ANON - anonymouse on July 17, 2006
    Awww, that's so sweet - I like the idea of them combining their alchemy to give Al a body again! Please please write more, I come to this site to read this story now!
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  • From ANON - Juna on July 17, 2006
    So cute i love this story. can i call it cute? I mean Roy thinking Ed is a girl and the way Ed is i mean being all quiet and cautiose makes it seem so cute! I can imagine it! Gah love it. And yay Al has a body to move now in. Update real soon i cannot wait to read more. =3
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  • From ANON - michelle on July 17, 2006
    an update Xd i know about being tired. i know i will be once i get a computer n my house and i'm typing my own stories. this one is really good and interesting.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on July 15, 2006
    Very interesting, I quite like this story. I hope you stick with it. I'm looking forward to see how it plays out.

    P.S. Correct spelling is Havoc and Maes
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  • From ANON - michelle on July 13, 2006
    i really like this. i hope you update soon. is there going to be any smut in this story?
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