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Reviews for Housework

By : TrulyWished
  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on July 13, 2006
    holy crap, this is great. but you may wanna put some space between paragraphs to make it easier for your readers.
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  • From ANON - Ri on July 12, 2006
    Heh shopping, cute! Okay loving it loving it! And Roy named her tammy!!! HAH HAH i would have guessed more of a cathy look. XD Anyways great chapter can't wait to read more. ^_^
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  • From ANON - sillk on July 11, 2006
    Hi there ^-^

    I'm agreeing with the lot, this story is developing really nice so far. You're getting better and better ^-^
    There were several typos in the first real chapter (e.g. "Havok" or "Meas") and the story was a bit clouded (like that red herring with Riza), but the next two chapters convinced me and took me in ^-*

    Good work, I'm looking forward to your next update!

    *kisses* sillk
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  • From ANON - Anonymouse on July 11, 2006
    Hehe, poor Ed...though I'll note he's only keeping his cover so well if he's opting for more guy clothes than girl clothes. Also, what happened to his voice? Inquiring minds want to know...
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  • From ANON - Anonymouse on July 11, 2006
    Awww...I like how Ed is smart enough to keep his mouth shut cause Roy thinks he's a girl. And Al being with him, and being his primary concern, makes me very happy too. Ed tucking the armor piece into bed with him is the sweetest thing ever. As is Roy making sure the poor kid gets enough to eat, awww...

    More please!
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  • From ANON - Anonymouse on July 11, 2006
    Holy cheese and crackers, this looks interesting! I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on July 10, 2006
    Unique and interesting idea. I've enjoyed the first few chapters and am looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Ri on July 09, 2006
    Well this story is very interesting and you got my attention. So please keep it up and i cannot wait to read more. ^_^
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