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By : TrulyWished
  • From ANON - Doodle_Penguin on August 10, 2008
    Oh God. That Never gets old. no matter how many times i read it it still makes me cry. I love this story. truely
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  • From ANON - InkHeart17 on February 23, 2008
    First of all, I have to say I am in love with this story! I haven't reviewed prior chapters because I just want to keep reading. For changing up the history, Ed still seems VERY in-character. And Roy seems very sensible when it comes to Ed and Al. You're doing a marvelous job.

    I'm sure someone's already told you this by now, but Ed and Elysia share a birthday on the show and it's somewhere in the winter months. But if you're going off the manga I'm in no position to correct as I've only made it through the fourth book.
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  • From ANON - Rika on December 04, 2006
    Omg! That was beautiful!!!! I absolutly loved all the chapters!!! Omg, I'm going to be thinking about this for weeks now!!
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  • From ANON - sandraccoon on November 27, 2006
    Reall good story. I love it. A few small errors though. "A mansion five feet tall" isn't really that big. You may want to change it to seven stories with 50 rooms or something like that. Still though, a wonderful story with a wonderful plot.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From Lici on November 09, 2006
    You made me cry! It was sweet and wonderful and I think the writers for FMA should get their asses up and have you doing the scenes and ideas!

    Much love for a wonderful writer and a VERY talented creator. Thank you for such a great read, I couldn't get up and leave. Literally, I sat and read for five hours strait. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - kuragari75 on November 06, 2006
    AWWWW!!! I'm sad this is over but what a way to go! well done! Love this story and will probably read it more than once ^-^! Awsome ending as well. I hate it when endings don't make sense but this one was done really well. GOOD JOB!!! *bows*
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  • From ZaKai on November 04, 2006
    First of all, I must say that I loved your story. Fabulous!! I actually just stumbled across your story tonight and read all the way through it. (I had no idea that it was complete, but that made me very happy to find that out!) I rarely read fan fiction at all anymore, (I’m just to busy with school, and when I do have free time I’d rather write than read...) and sadly enough I have a list of stories that I read a chapter here or there, but your story... your story grabbed me from the very beginning and wouldn’t let me go. Not only was it compelling and interesting, the characters were very well written and full of personality and emotion. I liked how your story transitioned from Ed hiding his gender from Roy, to how they all became accustomed to each other, to them becoming a ‘family’, to Roy’s feelings and Ed’s curiosity, to Roy going away and Al getting his body back, and then to Ed and Al taking care of Roy to finally the heartwarming ending of them teaching alchemy to kids. Again, great job! I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing it and sharing it.

    - Z

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  • From ANON - gndmlvr01 on November 03, 2006
    Totally brilliant fic. Loved every bit of it! Thank you so much for writing!
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  • From ANON - Roxas on October 16, 2006
    I enjoyed all your twistes and ends with this story just wanted you to know i enjoyed reading it.


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  • From ANON - Frozen_taho on October 01, 2006
    Oh man, you're really good at this. I've never read a Roy I didnt like. This one takes the cake, this dependent, baby-ish psycho creeps me the hell out.

    By the way, I forgot to thank you for vetoing the Roy/Al notion. That wouldve ruined everything for me, going this far into your story and would have had to drop it. THANKS!
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  • From ANON - Frozen_taho on October 01, 2006
    Wow, thats an awefully gutsy move: killing off the original cast and replacing them with faceless names. Roy's spooking me out as well.
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  • From ANON - Frozen_taho on October 01, 2006
    *whistles* That was NOT how I anticipated their first time to be. I'm still kinda in shock.
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  • From ANON - Frozen_taho on October 01, 2006
    Ok, this is getting a bit too...domestic. IS this AFF.net or family hour? Bring on the HEAT!!!
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  • From ANON - Frozen_taho on October 01, 2006
    Finally, some contact. I was starting to worry that Roy was getting too comfortable playing the dad role.
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  • From ANON - Frozen_taho on October 01, 2006
    Man, this story is really getting to me. I love everything about it. Finding a good, solid RoyEd fic isnt as easy as I first thought it would be. Apparently, the fandom is bursting with mindless, cheap drabbles. Im falling in love with you. HEhehe.
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