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Reviews for Of Ghosts and Swords, Words and Wars

By : draechaeli
  • From feidragon on January 14, 2008
    I really like the approach this is taking. Is there any possible chance it will actually continue?! It's always the fics I want to read that are incomplete...*sigh*
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  • From Madefreakshow27 on July 21, 2007
    more please!!! it's really good =]
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  • From hellfire1202 on May 24, 2007
    hey

    i don´t want to ctiticise you, because english isn´t my native language and definitly not my strong point either, but i like your story and something struck me as rather odd

    my native language is german, since i´m from austria, so i thought it odd that treize told the dog to ´steig aus´, but then i saw that you wanted to translate the command ´get off´
    you are right, ´get off´can mean ´steig aus´, but it holds the context of getting off of a bus or something like that, not really a command meant for a dog, in that case you would tell the dog ´geh runter´or rather ´runter!´or ´aus´
    ´geh runter´can be literally translated as ´get off´, ´runter´as ´off´-i think it would be the most appropriate, seeing as it perfectly works withmy own dog - and ´aus´means ´stop´

    they are rather common comands in the german language for dogs

    i hope i wasn´t too obnoxious and i didn´t want to intrude, but it rather irked me, like an itch you can´t scratch

    sorry, i hope you´re not mad, i just meant to help


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  • From ANON - Reilata on August 26, 2006
    Ah, I quite enjoy how this story is progressing. It has been quite some time since
    I have delved into reading Gundam, as most seem to lack.. substance.. characters with
    no real depth or personality. Of course this could be said of many 'fics' floating about..bah.
    The pace of your story.. the characterizations, amusing dog names(Holy Roman Emperor indeed heh),
    and notes with -research- *hearts and stuff*.
    Er.. needless to say, I'll be keeping an eye on this story and wishing you
    with good health.. and a healthy dose of whatever gives you inspiration.
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on July 17, 2006
    i really did like this and hope to see more.
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