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  • From ANON - V. on September 20, 2006
    Awsome! Update soon, please.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 20, 2006
    oooohh they finally had hot monkey sex and it doesn't seem like goku regrets it.
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on September 20, 2006
    (Wipes steam off computer screen) WOW! That was hot! I hope that Goku doesn't start shrinking away and that Piccolo can help the two convince the others that nothings wrong! Update soon, Please! :)
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  • From ANON - DARK on September 16, 2006
    You have a great talent at describing emotions and feelings, the relationship of the two saiyans seem so real, you're really amazing. Please, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Michelle on September 12, 2006
    Awwwww I loved it!!!! and here i was thinking that the last chapter was the end- Awesome, Awesome, Awesome!! "How the woman could have the impudence to make such abominable suggestion was beyond his comprehension." --- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA that was PERFECT- Great job
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  • From ANON - Irol on September 12, 2006
    wow bulma is a witch! but i loved this chapter, they're so cute. i like a mushy vegeta.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 12, 2006
    aaww the perfect mis of angst and fluff
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on September 12, 2006
    I Hope Bulma doesn't do anything to hurt the baby! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Risk on September 05, 2006
    Genial, como siempre.

    No lo he podido leer antes, pero me ha gustado mucho. Entonces, Goku está con un Vegeta pequeñito en su interior? Madre mía.

    Supongo que como Goku ya está fuertecillo el niño ya se habrá casi desarrollado por completo, no? Si no no le estaría dejando tanta energía... ¡¡Y ya quedará menos!! Digo yo...

    Por cierto, y los preparativos para la habitación del nene? Supongo que tendrá una habitación para él solo... no?
    De momento no se me ocurre mucho más para comentar, pero ya se me ocurrirá.
    Ah, y a los diez años los besos son un asco. Puagh, normal que Goten no lo entienda...
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  • From ANON - zoe on August 26, 2006
    Thats so cute *god I sound all girly yuck* but the hole purring thing is cute. HA HA 50 I think id pass out yay longer than Goku did at the prospect of event 10% of that many children let alone 50.
    Vegeta said that Goku got to decided wether he wants to get pegnated as well, did you mean controceptive's or are you going to make the saijns have a mental pregnant block?

    as per usual great chapter I cant wait for the next one so plz update soon?
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on August 26, 2006
    wow another wondeful chapter
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  • From ANON - Kallipso on August 14, 2006
    It was not that only a person that has been dead with in a year can be wished back. The dragon balls where already used thats why they had to wait a year, Prongoua gives you two or three wishes when you summon him.
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  • From ANON - Risk on August 13, 2006
    Oh, and with "time" i meant "chapters" XD
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  • From ANON - Risk on August 13, 2006
    I loved it!! I read the two chapters altogether and it seems I want to have more!!
    Anyway, loved how you pictured all the situation with the little demi-saiyans and all. It's hard to make them understand what's going on, but it turned out well. Anyway, I was going to say that Goku was a little ooc, but who wouldn't if you were tired as hell? And pregnant!
    And they make such a lovely couple... Since you have described them as a couple that's getting mature and growing together. Hmmm... well, hope you get what I mean.

    And Goten is uber cute! Really!!

    Just please, keep writing! I'm getting back to my "old" Toriyama style too.. XD

    About porunga and shenron... Well, porunga has a lot more power than shenron, as he can fulfill three wishes at a time... But then again, shenron was able to do that later... Porunga revived all the earthlings when Buu wiped them out, and managed to have the earth back to its original stats, but well, I think when it comes to reviving ppl he's much alike shenron...
    Shenron could revive them if they were killed or dead by no natural cause and in the frame time of a year. But I think that's because it was reviving the body, so if the body got rotten, Shenron couldn't do anything. But again, Bulma managed to build a machine to preserve Krilin's body when he got killed by Tambourine, Piccolo Daimaoh's creation. So well, I dunno.

    And one question, do you speak spanish? (It'll be nice to review in spanish cos it's hard thinking in two different languages at the same time XD)

    Oh, and how will Goten react if he sees that his new sibling's got a tail? Gohan had one but got rid off it a long time ago... And Trunks? Will the baby saiyan eat like there's no tomorrow? How much time's left to goku to have the baby?
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  • From ANON - Ze' Bunny on August 13, 2006
    Nooooooo! I ran out of chapters to read! Wrtie more! Fast! :-D I have been obsessed with your story for the past 2 and a half hours. I LOVE it and I can't wait to read more. You really are a wonderful writer! Your style is very easy to get into. The character and emotions you've given to Goku and Vegeta are so wonderful. I love thier affection for each other. It feels more real then sappy. I LOVE your story!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write some nire. :-D he he!

    Your new dedicated fan,
    Starla aka Ze' Bunny

    PS. Your english is really good. What is your native laungua and how long have you been in America/known how to read and write in engish?

    PPS. Here are some possible baby names for you:

    Huri, karri, Zurie, or Zena if its a girl and Ziron, Gotack, or Reznor if its a boy. :-D
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