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By : Tyrana
  • From ANON - Black Crystal on August 13, 2006
    hey as far as i remember there is a time limmit in which the dragon can bring people / planets back to life .. i can't remember the time frame though i think it was either 1 or 2 or 5 ... which is y vegeta could never bring back planet Vegeta
    BC xx
    ps. good chapter!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on August 13, 2006
    i know that porunga can bring anybody back no matter how many times they have died and shenron can bring back a person only once which means if they die again you cannot bring them back. for both dragons there is no real timeline of when you have to bring the person back. just remeber it takes the dragon ball a year to re-charge after making a wish and that a namek year is different then a earth year. hear is all the info i can remeber for the dragon balls so i hope it helps.
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  • From ANON - Michelle on August 13, 2006
    I think Porunga has basically has the same rules as Shenron but you could always say that when they modified him again(d so that he could bring back more than one person per wish(Dende said during kid Buu saga), that they also made it to where it didnt matter when they died, that is if you needed to use it that way. Nice chapter, things went along well
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2006
    I also forgot to add this to my review. After the Frieza saga the Nameks fix Porunga powers to where he can revive thousands of people in one wish. Watch the Kid buu saga, it shows it coming true when Kibitokai, Dende, elder kai travel to Namek to help Goku and Vegeta.

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2006
    Great story so far. To answer your question Porunga can revive anyone who has died no matter how long they have been dead. The only thing he can't do is bring them back if they dided a natural causes.
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  • From ANON - zoe on August 12, 2006
    Great chapter, I loved how Goten and Trunks reacted to the news ^_^
    Porunga can bring back anyone as many times as a person wants but he can only bring back one dead person/alian at a time, but he has 3 wishes, while shenrong (sp?) can only grant 2 wishes, but he can bring back mutiple dead people/alians at a time, unless they have been wished back befor. Hope that helps.

    Update soon plz
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  • From Tyrana on August 03, 2006
    Thank you to everybody who had reviewed this new chapter.
    To kit-kit,irol, Empress, Anomlov: Thank you for your support, I'm very glad you like this story. I hope that you continue to give me your opinion in the next chapters.
    To Michelle and Tesgura I sent them an e-mail but if you haven't received it, thank you.
    To Prince Kakarot: I receive your e-mail, I think you have read my fic in this site, thank you.
    I will update as soon as I can.
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on August 03, 2006
    Another fantastic chapter! I can't wait to see how the boys take the news. I also like your explanation on male pregnancy, your the only author I know of that has tried to explain it. Again great job!
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  • From ANON - Empress on August 03, 2006
    The ever lazy/procastinating me just finished reading your explanation on mpreg and I loved it^_^ I also love the story. You are a very wonderful writer.
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  • From ANON - Irol on August 03, 2006
    this was great, very sweet how worried goku is over their sons. and your M/P explanation was very good to my standards, very understandable.
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  • From ANON - Michelle on August 03, 2006
    I really like it, I'm not a fan of male pregnancy, but the way you do it isnt annoying or stupid, I commend you, and i'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. And you should name the kid Malikai, or Nycorim, just my opinion. Great job!!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on August 03, 2006
    nice chapter and all i have to say about the explanation is that it works for me.
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  • From Tyrana on July 31, 2006
    To Bijou:
    Thank you for your comments, I'm glad you like it. And thank you for your suggestions for the baby's name.
    About Chichi beeing the dad *shudders and faints* , What has the harpy been hiding under his, I mean her skirt all this time? He,he.
    I'm glad that you like how I'm portraying Goku, I wasn't very sure it I was making him very OOC.
    I'm sorry that you don't understand the attitude of Vegeta maybe I haven't been very good at explaining that. But if you have read chapter six at the beginning it said that Vegeta hadn't seen Goku in three weeks so he had so many time to think about the situation and make a decision, and in the next chapter, Vegeta explains to Piccolo that he knows how Goku's feeling all the time. It's just that the prince has a perfect timing (just kidding!). I thought it was interesting to make him appear in that precise moment.
    Thank you again, your reviews are always interesting.Bye!
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  • From ANON - Bijou on July 31, 2006
    yeah! ^^ goku chan is pregnant @-->---
    ^3^

    Gods, hopefully his harpy does not believe, that she is the daddy! O.O` / ^.-
    I love your story!
    i like it, that kakarott said, that he needs time to think about everything. ( it seems, that he IS really an adult now *smile*)but even if he already have changed a bit, you still saved his
    charakter. thatīs great to read! ^^

    But i was a little bit confused about the way the prince react, when he arrived at the lookout. i donīt expected, that he wouldnīt find the courage to see kakarott. ^^ but maybe itīs because he could feel goku all the time and knew whatīs going on( not necessary to apear earlier*smile* )
    yeah, iīm curious what happens next!! ^___^
    oh, wait! You want names, wonīt you? ^^
    okay iīll try, but donīt expect too much - (i mean donīt laugh.)
    :)

    well, first idea is simple : kakarott, vegeta.
    than bardock, beijita...
    and here are ,,saiyan" names ( ,,vegetable like" ^^) vega, carot, kales, avoca, errh... : japanese food! Like ,,Gohan" = rice dish : nigiri,okashi,Doshi,Yokan,Taiyaki,wasabi,...
    yap, thatīs all. sorry!^^ (Beside: i named my cat ,,medusa" for no good reason.
    i donīt know if iīm the right person to suggest names for a child, even if the child does not exsist. ^^°° )

    okay, bye bye.
    ^^ Bijou.












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  • From Tyrana on July 30, 2006
    To Risk:
    Thank you, I'm glad you like it.
    Well about feeding the baby, there's no much options so it had to be like any other human baby with bottles of milk, if I can't think of anything better.
    Very funny your explanation about the saiyans clothes, he he.
    About Bardock as the mother, well I have a theory about that, that it will be explained in further chapters, just think of this: Vegeta is the carbon copy of his father and he's the first son, but Goku is the copy of Bardock and he's the second son, so what can this mean? I hope that you'll find my explanation credible, though I don't know in which chapter will appear.
    About your random thoughts, don't worry, I'm glad that you find this fic interesting enough to make you reflect about so many things.
    Thanks again.
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