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By : Tyrana
  • From ANON - Risk on July 30, 2006
    I love this fan fic! I just want to read the next chapter of it, I just stumbled down here looking for some DB fan-fics and found yours soooooo cute!
    I'd love to "see" the baby...! Just find a proper name for him, since he'll be a fully saiyan, he'd be holding a special name, won't he? Aaaaand one question, how will Goku feed the kid since baby saiyans are collected all in those big nursery places so then they're sent to different destinations in those huge baseballs? I mean, he is a mammal, but doesn't have the proper attributes to feed the kid as humans do...
    Oh, and it reminds me of the OVA with Goku's father on it, Bardock. So Bardock is his "mother" -supposing he's the one who got preg-? Hmmm... that could explain many things... But, now that i can see is why is saiyan's clothing so elastic and durable... XD
    Anyway, cute theory, i had my suspicions but you pictured the saiyan race in a logical manner. That's a reasonable way to explain why all saiyans are men and there's not any women. I first thought they did the horrible -human- way of raping women of the places they conquered and getting them pregnant for their race's continuity but i really love this theory instead...

    AAAAAARRRGGHHH, sorry for the random thoughts, your fic made me think of them!
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  • From ANON - zoe on July 27, 2006
    Hehe Great chapter very funny. Poor Goku all weak for the next 5 1/2 months. Are you going to put in a earth invasion while Gokus all weak or will the pregnancy run as smootha s a pregnancy can run while hormones are running high?
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on July 27, 2006
    poor poor vegeta he stuck with goku and i wonder how goten and gohan is going to take there father being pregnant.
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  • From ANON - Jhon Doe on July 23, 2006
    I'm really enjoying your fanfic. I am pretty poor with names, but if you wish to use these you are welcome to them. Male: Randor, Lorn, Dradick, Talon. Female: Suna, Trill, Lanta, Gima.
    Please update soon! Hate or love these names I just want to read the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - bloodyrose on July 23, 2006
    It's a wonderful story and i'm glad you finally updated ^_^ it's sweet the way vegeta cares for goku but i think it's time for goku to show his sweetness to vegeta ne? ^_~ just a silly suggestion, as for the names i would like to suggest Ixis or Noin don't know what they mean but don't they sound just cuuuuttteeeee!!!! you should update it more often! i'm sure most of your readers feels the same way. Keep up the good work and may your muses keep flowing ^_^
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  • From ANON - zoe on July 23, 2006
    Chi Chi is overly emotional one minute Happy and polite, then all sad and concerned, then a mean bitch.
    For Baby names if its a boy it should proberly be caled Vegeta, in the DBZ series it says that all kings and princes of planet Vegeta are called Vegeta indicating thier royal status.
    If its going to be a girl or you want a diferent name for the boy all the names of the saiyans are names of vegtables in japanese, Vegeta means vegtable, Kakarott means carrot, Raditz means raddish, Bardock brocolie and so on...
    So if you transtate a few vegtable or fruit names you have a bonified saiyan name :)
    Hope to see your next update soon
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  • From ANON - Irol on July 22, 2006
    This is great my fav fics are the ones with the whole heat, mating, M/Preg thing. they give youa an inside look on a saiyan's life.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on July 22, 2006
    i knew goku was pregnant i think the baby should be a boy named vegetto or gogeta, you know from when vegeta and goku fused togerther against buu and that other guy in GT.
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  • From LadyNarutoChan on July 22, 2006
    It's really an awsome story ! And it's so rare nowadays to find one with Goku as the submissive... Like if Vegeta was a sub -_- that's unbelieveble for me !

    Will your story contain M-preg ?

    Cna't wait to see the next chapter ! Hope you will update soon !!! ^^
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  • From ANON - zoe on July 21, 2006
    Great chapter, I hope that Vegeta and Goku can both properly accept thier fate, although Vegea seems to be taking it well apart from avoiding Goku.
    Hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - curious 36 on July 20, 2006
    love this story keep it up.
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  • From ANON - curious 36 on July 20, 2006
    i am like the direction the story is taking. please keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on July 19, 2006
    wow i can't wait for the next chapter
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