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By : Tyrana
  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on November 30, 2008
    that was quite a compact little lemon in that first chapter
    I can tell from your other fanfics that you've developed them no end =)
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  • From ANON - Kyoto on April 22, 2007
    God your story is great please go on complete the story its a wonderful and great story. You really out done yourself this time
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on February 16, 2007
    first of all: ^______^
    ....
    .....*blink*blink*
    ....
    *BLUSH*
    :D !!!
    whhhhhhhha wow!!! ^O^
    don´t know, what to say! errrh, well... nothing but: ---> that´s just amazing!!!
    noone ever did that for me!!! *-*
    THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH my dear!!! ^3^ *hug and kiss*
    yahhh, i think i´ll copy it now and show it proudly to everybody i know, like : "look, she wrote my name - MY!-right there! right above the chapter, you see that? y´know what that means?????? *smirks like a maniac* Yes! you got it! she dedicatet to me!" *giggle*
    again: thank you very, very much sara!!!!!!
    *dance and sing* :D

    well, but now i wanna comment the chapter. ^^
    uhhh, how i loved the part, as geta sent his ki into gokus abdomen
    and the baby reacts. that was so cute and the imagine of the baby with the little thumb in his mouth was either! i´m knowing what i´m talking about, because i could see it in my mind. *grins*

    and as you already know, i love the way you describe their feelings with so much emotional deepness and sensetivity!!! ^^
    it´s just like dreaming in the whole story and see it like my own movie- strip in my thoughts. i love to dream away, and i´m really proud and much more very thankful and just happy, that you dedicatet this chapter to me.
    *hugs and kiss´ you senceless*
    *smirk*
    thanks!!!!
    can´t wait for the next chapter!!! keep on writing hun!!!
    Bijou :3 "Saiyanprincess" ^.~
    Love YA !
    :)






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  • From ANON - Michelle on January 26, 2007
    Oh my gosh, amazing, and i have to say i like where you're taking this and how you're taking it there. Dealing with Goku's and Vegeta's emotions and writing them down in an explainable way is extremely difficult. I found it easiest just to say that Goku is a Libra and Vegeta is an Aries, Trust me it works.

    Amazing chapter, my heart implodes when i read stuff that makes me think and feel. So thank you, even though it kind of hurts, it's a good thing
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on January 26, 2007
    love it
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  • From ANON - Chiaki on January 13, 2007
    More please! This is too cute of a fic to let go. :]
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on November 25, 2006
    hi there, ^^
    i think it isn´t boring. not at all. even if pregnancy isn´t the newest thing around here.
    but actually, you wrote it in your own way,your very own style and with that it isn´t anything but boring.
    i also think, that because people don´t feel like write you reviews, doesn´t mean anything. - or you shouldn´t get worry about it. if YOU think by yourself, that your story nedd changes, than i would change something, but not just because people don´t reviewed. as i said, i don´t really think that it meant something.
    errr, okay, now my true review! ^__^
    first of all i wanna say, i really like that arale appeared and that she´ll help them through pregnancy. it was very funny, that vegeta have to run the tests, either. but i think it was a big help for goku that his prince agreed to do it. ^__^
    and the way you describe the feelings and thoughts of everybody, esspecially goku´s is very, very well!
    oh, and i like to read, that goku is smart and not the naive big baka, in your story! it´s interesting and just nice to read how he behaves. but poor namekian. i think he´s a little bit confused, after goku said him blunt to point that he has no chance to win, if he would fight the prince. even if i´m sure piccolo already knows that. to hear it from his old friend and decorated with vegetas grin it is just...ummmh...
    really. poor piccolo. *g*
    so. you´ve done a great job again and i´m looking forward the next chapter.
    bye. :)



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  • From ANON - Anomlov on November 23, 2006
    Yeah! After coming on here like five times I finally got to finish reading chapter 14! I love that they have someone to help with the pregnancy! They seem like they are in good hands! Poor Piccolo seems to be keep getting hit with Goku's strange actions. :) lol I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
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  • From ANON - Dark~kakarot on November 16, 2006
    Keep up the great work you are doing fine I love it. Just keep going for the 19 time i Cant stop reading this story I have read it over and over and lost precious fic writing time myself
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 16, 2006
    love it love it i can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Dark~Kakarot on October 20, 2006
    *he would put his hands together and begin to clap while tears came from his eyes* BRAVO!! BRAVO!!! YOUR PRACTICLY THE BEST WRITER EVER LOL WELL I STILL HAVE MORE TO RED BUT OHWELL YOU COOL A WONDERFUL STORY TRUST ME IF YOU WERE TO ENTER A CONTEST THIS WOULD MOST LIKELY WIN..WELL OTHER THAN COME WITH ME. AND PERSISTANCE ALONG WITH 512
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on October 14, 2006
    Ohh..soooo sweet. I love that Goku did that murel and I'm glad that the baby is doing well. I hope that everything goes well for Vegeta and Goku with their little baby. Can't Wait! Great chappie.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on October 12, 2006
    aaww so fluffy
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  • From ANON - Risk on October 01, 2006
    Um... Nada que comentar. Me han gustado mucho los dos capítulos, aunque ahora sí que siento curiosidad por los demás personajes. Sobre todo por cómo se lo habrá tomado Krilín.

    Ya falta menos, no?

    Digo para lo del bebé...

    Soy como las marujas con lo de la Leti... pero con Goku!! XD
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  • From ANON - TooShy on September 24, 2006
    This story is lovely, please continue the great job.
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