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Reviews for Father's Sudden Distraction

By : becka91

From ANON - Saiyan-jin-lover on August 23, 2006
GAH!! I love it! You can NEVER find any King Vegeta and Bardock stories out there! And yours is so well written! I love how you made them act! Makes me feel like I'm watching a movie! And they are so...GAH! I REALLY REALLY REALLY wish for you to update and put another chapter in! It would be awesome! I'll be waiting!

Please hurry!
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From becka91 on July 29, 2006
sorry guys i'm trying, almost done please be pastient with me i'm not the fastest writer in the world, but thanx much for the good reviews! they sure did make my day. i'll have the next chappie asap! luv ya fans much!
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From ANON - i don't have a name on July 29, 2006
this story is great so far, i was upset there was only one chapter so that means you have to make with the second chapter or else...

vageta- huh? you want me to blow who's head off?
me- the author's
vageta- absolutely not, how will i ever know what happens to me?
me- good point

kk, well you get it, next chappie pwease!! soon!
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From ANON - anon on July 28, 2006
yea...wierd people...great story though!!! i loved it, continue soon.
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From ANON - vegeta'sgirl on July 28, 2006
Omg!! this story is soooo good!!!

Vegeta: aww little me!! i'm so cute.
Bulma: quit bein so concieted!
Vegeta: shut up slave woman!
Bulma: wut did you just call me!!
Goku: okay you guys, break it up.
Bulma/Vegeta: she/he started it!

me: well guys shut up so i can tell her to get another chapter up as soon as possible! loved it, please continue! :)
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From ANON - HieiSprinceBato on July 28, 2006
thank you much for being my very first review and making it nice I'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as possible. more reviews and I'll speed up the process, please and thank you!
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From ANON - Tristalovesvegeta on July 28, 2006
I liked it, write more please!
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