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Reviews for Chimera

By : TrulyWished
  • From ANON - Jazz on September 08, 2006
    Awwee poor Ed...

    Id never be able to chose between my boyfriend and my little brother... Or... well in my case my bestfriends/sister-ishs people and my little sister... little sisters actually...

    I'm surprised I dont have nightmares about choosing between the four of them... I think if I could only save one of them I'd die trying to save all four... Hmmm... *goes to write a story about that*

    Oh before I go I agree that this chapter wasnt particularly happy... but it did show more of Ed's loyal personality... And poor Roy too... I am never going to war or anything like that... and you know what poor Riza too... ^_^;;; Although... if I was in that position Id be taking pictures for black mail purposes... hehehe... ^_^

    Anywayz... I'm am going to write... or... go to bed... or something... I dunno...

    ~Jazz

    P.S. I love your story!! Your an amazing writer... and I shall email you... eventually... hehehe... I know! I'll email you the next time I write something and maybe you can edit it for me?
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  • From ANON - Jazz on September 08, 2006
    *glomps trulywished* Your back!!! ^_^

    *squeals like the rabid fangirl she is* Ed is soooo cute!!! ^_^ Awwweee!!!!

    And your back!!! Yay!!!

    I was about to go to bed when I decided to see if you updated and there was two chapters! Yay!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - mirandler43 on September 02, 2006
    I don't know why, but I'm a little confused. (But I'm having a really stupid day, so I'm not completely surprised...) Why is Ed acting so weird? I'm sure I'm just forgetting some detail about his condition, or that it will be explained next chapter.

    I love your stories. I'm pretty new to the fanfic scene, and I just recently started reading FMA fics. I looked at your author's profile and realized that almost all of my favorites from this site were written by you! Random, yes, but I thought you might like to know...:)

    I hope you return to us soon!
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  • From ANON - Jazz on September 02, 2006
    Ohhhhhh Thanks for the P.S.

    I get it now. ^_^

    And he isnt freaking out about Al because...?

    Is it because they're related?
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  • From ANON - Jazz on September 01, 2006
    Why is Ed so upset? Hmmm...

    Oh well I know how he feels with that whole he wants to stay but his instincts say no thing...

    I dont really get why hes freaking out at Roy...

    I guess hes upset which explains the no touching rule... but why is he freaking out about being at Roys house but not wanting to leave?
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  • From ANON - Jazz on September 01, 2006
    Awwww. Roys such a sweetheart.

    Ed's a lucky... cat-boy...

    Now if only we could find a straight boy that sweet and cute in real life... hmmm...
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  • From ANON - milky on September 01, 2006
    Ooh, conflict! I like the fact that Ed and Roy are not going to have an easy time of it this time. What will happen next!?
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  • From ANON - zoe on August 31, 2006
    funny chapter, although I found Eds behaviour kind of unusual, was he mad at Roy because he wouldnt let Ed play with that girls plat? Hope that you update agin soon this has to be one of my current favrout storys.
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  • From ANON - lelann on August 28, 2006
    love the fic! cat edward is so great! i liked how their mom kicked their dad out when she found out about the experiments, i always thought that she would be a really strong person. more soon, thanks for the fic so far!
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  • From ANON - Lurker on August 27, 2006
    Ah! Roy spanking Ed one of my favorite things to read, thank you! And it was just cute how Ed was stuck in that tree.
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  • From milky on August 25, 2006
    Mmm...I am drunk on both vodka and your fic right now, I have no idea if I can be coherent. But Ed being stuck up a tree is love, and Roy loving on both the Elrics is also love - again, I love how he's sort of their daddy too, it's sweet in a slightly squicky way - and the puzzle thing is great and yeah.

    I wish I coul dencourage you better, I really do. Because you know, your writing has gotten honed so fast, I am envious, and I hope you keep writing in this fandom because you're seriously the reason I come to check affn. It is always nice to see someone taking an idea and having fun with it, and that is what you are doing here and it is wonderful.


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  • From ANON - mina on August 25, 2006
    omg!omg!omg! I love this fic! Your a awsome writter and i hope u update soon! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon! I'll luv u 4-ever!
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  • From ANON - Jazlynn Sasaki on August 25, 2006
    Okay... Well.. I havent reviewed to either of your stories that I've read (housework and chimera) mostly because I didnt know I could if I didnt have an account. Now that I know I can I shall review to every new chapter you post. ^_^

    I loved Housework by the way... parts of it almost made me cry! *hugglez Edo-kun*

    And this story of I love more! Kitty Ed is always fun... especially when hes ruled by hormones. Very amusing. Hehehe...

    Once again I love your stories they're very well written and you do a good job of keeping the plot.

    Keep up the good work!! ^_^

    ~Jazz (One of the many characters I've created)

    P.S. Could you email me when you get the chance? Id like, if your willing, some pointers on keeping the plot. I do relatively good with oneshots... but I cant seem to keep the plot long enough to write a decent chapter story.

    I can develop characters well enough... But my stories for some reason become plotless 2 or so chapters into them... Maybe I need to work on creating a solid plot in the first place... hmmm...
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  • From ANON - zoe on August 24, 2006
    very fun chapter cant wait to see more so plz update soon
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  • From ANON - Lisa on August 24, 2006
    Ooooh Al bitched them out good. Wonderful story!
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