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Reviews for It's All Wrong

By : KumikoChan
  • From AliceMina on July 12, 2007
    Hey, I liked the story. The sad ending was very "Don't Fear the Reaper". Sad and sweet. I think that the ending (the add-on) was good and didn't ruin the sad ending. Cool, very good writing.
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  • From ANON - senko09 on October 14, 2006
    *sniff* *sniff* i like it *sniff* *cries*the ending was sad........wait i even cried at the beginning *sniff* (yells at family) Stop stareing havent you ever seen a girl get emotional over a story!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Good job
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  • From ANON - cm34 on October 12, 2006
    oh to the morbid side of life where love wouldnt exist just strife
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  • From ANON - cm34 on October 12, 2006
    a lot of o.o.c
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  • From ANON - ladyfang_05 on October 10, 2006
    AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (tear) beautiful
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  • From ANON - RottenPalmTree&TheJumboShrimp on October 08, 2006
    I loved this story so much, but . . . The ending made me mad . . . Just a little. *fingers -->| |
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  • From ANON - naomi on September 24, 2006
    Hi, Thank you for reviewing my fic. I've only read the first chapter of this one but...wow. I love the emotion and angst:) Feels real and believable.
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  • From ANON - dana on September 21, 2006
    i liked you story and that is saying something because death fics are so sad. and you made this one really good icing them like that. i cried too it was sweet that they will be togehter and twisted because of what they had to do to be together. really nice keep on writing although i hope your next fic will be much happier.
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  • From ANON - Keely on September 16, 2006
    That was terribly sad T_T I think I'll go vry my eye's out now... But it was still good, lol.
    Drats, now I'm depressed... chocolate! XDD Anyways, great work!
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  • From ANON - Hello2You on September 12, 2006
    great job! plz ubdate, this is beyond awesome!
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  • From ANON - Darkanger on September 11, 2006
    Nice. I think I hate Aria just for being there. I mean, really, its EdxRoy. No girls needed. The built in angst from the competition is really good. Makes me feel sorry for all involved though.
    I just have one thing that bugs me. The age gap between the brothers I thought was four years. And the timeline is post series but ignoring the movie, I assume.

    Either way, this is an enjoyable read. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ashmin89 on September 11, 2006
    You cant stop there!How cud u!I want more.Is aria evil?Will ed survive?Do roy n ed get together?Plz,hurry up n write the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - milky on September 11, 2006
    So wow, if Roy's new squeeze just poisoned Ed, holy crap, that is amazing *_* Please let us know what happens.
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  • From ANON - Keely on September 09, 2006
    I don't want anyone to die by the end T_T
    I'm looking foreward to an update, I can see how that didn't turn out to be a oneshot! Yay for more! XDDD
    Great start. I don't have any suggestions, they'd probably be bad if I did... I'm sure whatever you come up with will be good ^^
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