Reviews for Heart of FireBy : SonSofia |
Chapter 6.
Great chapter. I am glad that Vegeta completed the training and found what he was looking for.
I wonder how far down memory lane Vegeta will travel, in his interactions with the new Goku. Will it be a horrific reminder of his past?
The next chapter looks most interesting. I look forward to seeing how these characters behave around each other now.
Keep up the great work!
Amazing! The poignant scenes and deep thoughts in this story, really draws me in.
I look forward to see what happens when Vegeta finishes his training.
Keep up the great writing!
Very fascinating. I like how you write this character's point of view. Those red creatures will get what is comming to them.
Keep it up.
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