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Reviews for Heart of Fire

By : SonSofia
  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 12, 2006

    Chapter 6.


    Great chapter. I am glad that Vegeta completed the training and found what he was looking for.


    I wonder how far down memory lane Vegeta will travel, in his interactions with the new Goku. Will it be a horrific reminder of his past?


    The next chapter looks most interesting. I look forward to seeing how these characters behave around each other now.


    Keep up the great work!


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  • From ANON - Macha on November 12, 2006
    Well, if you must change the title, then I'd go with the 'To the Ends of the Universe'. *shrugs*


    OH, this is getting so interesting. Vegeta has finally learned to IT. Goku is promising to haunt the other self...naked...hehehe, I get a kick out of that.

    And now, Vegeta has found him! Yeah! Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Trista on November 11, 2006
    Ah- he found him- sweet!!! That makes me happy. I LOVED the "in love with him or something" awesome, i can tell you're realling getting into everything. And as far as the new name goes, well i like heat of fire, but i think that the one that said the end of the universe or something was better than the to love a saiyan (or something), but either way, the story's the shit, the name shouldn't matter :) Awesome!!! Keep going!!!
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on November 09, 2006
    hi ^^it is your first ff? you´ve done a really good job! :) god, i badly hope, vegeta will find goku, as quick as he can. but with IT it´s easy, isn´t it ?! errr...hm. but how will goku react?! will he remember him, trying to even kill him??? ummmmh... ~.~ well, hopefully the prince got soon, that he not only miss his sparring partner but his soulmate, lover, his ....D*E*S*T*E*N*Y ! =:*____*:=
    i like your story! keep it on. :))bye.


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  • From ANON - Macha on November 04, 2006
    This chapter is by far the best so far. This includes story line and writing style! You kept my interest the whole chapter...and it was a long one!


    Can't wait for the update!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 04, 2006

    Amazing! The poignant scenes and deep thoughts in this story, really draws me in.


    I look forward to see what happens when Vegeta finishes his training.


    Keep up the great writing!


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  • From ANON - Yuurei on November 04, 2006
    Awesome story so far. I can hardly wait until Vegeta finally catches up to the new hardcore Goku. Poor little girl..but I must admit you completely surprised and shocked me with that one. I was all, "aww..cute little girl don't worry Goku's gonna help you," followed up with, "OMFG!!!" I feel I should have seen it coming, but I didn't realize the extent of Goku's newfound evil until that point. Wow... Well anyway, love the story so far and please update again soon.
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  • From Tyrana on October 21, 2006
    This chapter was just great. I love how you have portrayed Vegeta, and now that he has finally decided to go searching Goku things are getting more interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter, I want more!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on October 14, 2006
    Great story!!!!!
    The point of views are very captivating.
    I look forward to more. I give this story a 10/10.
    Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Macha on October 11, 2006
    YEAH! I am glad you switched to Vegeta's POV for a bit.

    I do have to wonder if Vegeta thinking about Goku as Goku, and not Kakarott, was intentional on your part.


    Hmmmm, what will Vegeta do when he arrives at that planet? What will he do if and when he finally finds Goku?
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  • From ANON - Trista on October 10, 2006
    Nice, you do a wonderful job talking from Vegeta's point of view. I also kind of like the connection with Goku subconsiously knowing, at first, that he wasn't from Lais, and i like even more the planet purging - Vegeta and crew - similarities. I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Irol on October 10, 2006
    ah vegeta is finally coming to his senses.
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  • From ANON - Macha on September 14, 2006
    Hmmmmm, rather interesting. If Goku does follow through with these orders, if he ever gets his memory back, he will have walked a mile in Vegeta's shoes...

    I like it! Now, you need to slow down a bit to catch the typo's MS Word would normally find...or perhaps someone will beta? *looks out at the crowd*
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  • From ANON - Irol on September 14, 2006
    wow this is certainly different. i don't dislike it but it may take some getting used to. i look forward to the next one.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on September 14, 2006

    Very fascinating. I like how you write this character's point of view. Those red creatures will get what is comming to them.


    Keep it up.


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