Reviews for Heart of FireBy : SonSofia |
There was quite a twists in this story. I'm glad that Vegeta was finally able to reach him and get him to voice his feelings. I would love an epilogue or a sequel. *spork* Anyway keep up the great work. I really enjoyed this story and I look forward to reading anything else you put out. :-)
Chapter 8
Deep, deep thoughts. Vegeta's brain must hurt after all that thinking!
Vegeta still is learning more about himself as he goes through this experience, and about Goku/Kakarott before he left Earth.
I can imagine they both would have quite a lunch conversation... assuming they eat in front of each other at this point in the story. I wonder too, if Tarneus' eating habits will reflect some measure of 'Goku.'
We'll have to wait and see. Great job so far! :-)
One thing is for sure, neither will be the same afterwards. I can only hope that good things will come out of this dark part of their lives. Whatever comes it will still be a gem to read.
There are a few minor spelling errors, but nothing major. Keep up the great work.
Chapter 7
Fantastic! The chemistry between Tarneus and Vegeta went as expected, but kept a fresh outlook on the possibilities.
I look forward the the eighth chapter!
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