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Reviews for Heart of Fire

By : SonSofia
  • From cueball2 on February 04, 2007

    There was quite a twists in this story. I'm glad that Vegeta was finally able to reach him and get him to voice his feelings. I would love an epilogue or a sequel. *spork* Anyway keep up the great work. I really enjoyed this story and I look forward to reading anything else you put out. :-)


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  • From chibivegeta on January 31, 2007


    sometimes it's best to not plan what you're going to write, let the fic have its own life, I've found that I get blocked if I try to control it too much.

    this chapter felt a little rushed, and there's no real explanation of why Goku would come back to himself, but overall it's an excellent effort, and entertaining. you might want to consider finding a beta reader, there's several little typos and such, but they did not detract.


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  • From Robyn on January 31, 2007
    :) YAY! Goku is back, and you managed to keep Vegeta in character!


    Great story! :) I look forward to seeing more from you!
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  • From chibivegeta on January 23, 2007


    holy crap.

    I haven't read anything so well-plotted out in quite a while. very much looking forward to the next chapter.


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  • From ANON - Rourinu on January 03, 2007
    Phew, you scared me! I thought you were going to announce that you were discontinuing the fic. Author notes usually mean bad news.

    I'll be happy to wait for the next chapter! Thanks for letting us know :)
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on December 03, 2006
    Yay! Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when they stop for food. Update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on December 02, 2006
    hi there!
    great chapter, liked it!!! very good job again!^________^
    ummmm....wow, so vegeta already knows, that "goku" felt in love with him
    and also knows, why kakarott left and what´s going on with tarneus. yeah, smart prince but ...argh! why
    he hadn´t been so smart, before kakarott left earth. ~.~
    but well, i hardly could enjoy the story, if this not had happened, right? :D yahpsi! ^^ because i really enjoy your story and the whole psychologicial thing is very interessting. the way you painted that "goku-tarnus" profil is just great and as i said, very interesting!! so please keep on, whenever you´ll find the time and inspiration. ^.~
    bye.
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  • From cueball2 on December 01, 2006

    Chapter 8


    Deep, deep thoughts. Vegeta's brain must hurt after all that thinking!


    Vegeta still is learning more about himself as he goes through this experience, and about Goku/Kakarott before he left Earth.


    I can imagine they both would have quite a lunch conversation... assuming they eat in front of each other at this point in the story. I wonder too, if Tarneus' eating habits will reflect some measure of 'Goku.'


    We'll have to wait and see. Great job so far! :-)


    One thing is for sure, neither will be the same afterwards. I can only hope that good things will come out of this dark part of their lives. Whatever comes it will still be a gem to read.


    There are a few minor spelling errors, but nothing major. Keep up the great work.


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  • From ANON - Macha on December 01, 2006
    Well, there certainly was a whole lot of thinking going on in this chapter. @.@ But the thought processes had to be put out there. :)

    hehehehe...Tarnues needs food....how Goku like.

    I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. When will Vegeta get his answers? Will they be too late in coming?
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  • From ANON - Michelle on November 30, 2006
    You know you're amazing right? you are, finals suck, good luck with them, and, as much as I don't want to say it (because it kills me), take your time-lol- this story is well worth the wait, and you never know when inspiration is gonna strike, so don't worry about it. As long as you continue on the the story, it's all good as far as I'm concerned.
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 21, 2006
    Oh, I love the unrelenting Goku! YAY! And Vegeta trying to figure out where to go from here...and figuring out what Goku had wanted in the first place, those were great!

    This story keeps getting better!
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on November 19, 2006
    ....,,kakarott looked bored and asked the prince, who are you?"... xD that was great! :)
    great job again! ^____^
    it´s interesting to read the conversations between Tarneus and Goku.
    It seems to me that Goku is the one who still desperately loves vegeta and Tarneus is the opposite. He doesn´t care, he´s more saiyan and nothing like "love" can ever hurt him. but you already make Tarneus remember a bit, don´t you? :)) Uhhhm, i really hope that he WILL remeber and also wants to... but wait! if goku tries to explain things to Tarneus, doesn´t mean it, that Tarneus want the explanations, either? Because they´re on soul split in two persons? The one who loves and the one who wants to get over it, for good?
    Hm. Oo...err- ya. ^.-
    i don´t know. I´m just very curious, what will happen in next chapter. so please keep on, i really like your story.
    bye. ^^
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  • From ANON - Trista on November 17, 2006
    Awesome, oh man I almost cried, it was beautiful. I love you and I love the story, keep going!!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 17, 2006

    Chapter 7


    Fantastic! The chemistry between Tarneus and Vegeta went as expected, but kept a fresh outlook on the possibilities.


    I look forward the the eighth chapter!


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  • From ANON - dark~kakarot on November 15, 2006
    You are doing great keep it up
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