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Reviews for Will Death Save Him?

By : KumikoChan
  • From ANON - tyleet88 on October 15, 2006
    :O wow this is a good story...well don't have the G guys standing there get their buns moving.....update soon k :D
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver (not logged in) on September 15, 2006
    I think this is a wonderful story. Very well written and descriptive. The only thing that bothered me, just because it's so unrealistic, was that none of the pilots, especially Heero could stop this man. You perhaps could have described him more or why he was able to overpower the boys. Also, just because Duo works at a bar doesn't make him the bar owner's property to sell off in payment of a debt he incurred. I think that you're a wonderful writer and wonderful writers should always make sure to keep their plots plausible and true to the cannon and/or characters, unless the fic is AU. I'm hoping that in the next chapter you will somehow explain why the two instances I mentioned were allowed to happen.

    Don't get me wrong, and please don't take this as a flame, because it's not! I loved the entire first chapter. You had me glued to each and every word you wrote. I only became confused when the man came to the door. Really good authors are few and far between, and you are one of them! I just have a problem with the boys not being able to overpower this man. It just isn't realistic given their training and who they are.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter regardless of an explanation or not. The fic is just that good, K ^_^

    Love and Kisses
    Kogas Hentai Luver
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