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Reviews for Lament

By : Brightside
  • From ANON - naomi on October 11, 2006
    Beautiful, but sad! It really pulled me in. I could relate to Roy having lost a good friend earlier this year. You really put your heart in:) Good job!
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  • From ANON - BrucesGirl on September 17, 2006
    Wow. That was just beautiful, Koi. You have such a wonderful way of just tying up your reaer and making them join you along for the emotional rollar coaster. The spacing was perfect. I loved it.

    Also, I think that your lack of description in the story really alluded to Mustang's mind set when all of this went down.

    Gorgeous writing. Bravo!
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