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Reviews for Doors

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ANON - Anna on October 31, 2006
    Ohhhh that was great!
    I wonder why she requested that, to make it easier for her for eavesdrop them, or to stop them from doing it.
    "while he fried a shrimp"
    that made me fall of my chair with laughing.

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  • From ANON - innerchild on October 06, 2006
    so much for being here in a sec... damn school. anyway, i loved that. having Lacil watch them and then getting turned on by it was great. hell, i'd probably be in the same situation as her if i saw that... i just wouldn't get caught. ;)

    -Inc


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  • From ANON - Mysty on October 01, 2006
    haha. Awesome! They got caught!
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  • From ANON - jenny on September 30, 2006
    Oh that was so good. Thank you for writing it.
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on September 30, 2006
    Muahaha! That end was delicious. And then this: "Ed was just a golden god bent on achieving pleasure", that was just beautiful *wipes tear off cheek* (and true!). And office sex with some sneaky person watching is just the hottest. Love!
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  • From ANON - Frozen_taho on September 30, 2006
    Glad to know we inspire you somehow. This was great, by the way. So hot and yet not completely without romance. You're really something.
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  • From ANON - milky on September 30, 2006
    *_* Oooh, so glad I inspired you. Office sex, with someone watching...very amusing. I like the proposition to remove all doors XDDDD One thing I'll note is that it would have been interesting to tell the sex itself slightly more from the third-party POV - what they could see, what they couldn't etc.
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  • From ANON - jen on September 30, 2006
    *rofl* i love those last lines.. hell i request the doors be removed too damn. i loved ur story, this one and the one before it. thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - TrulyWished on September 29, 2006
    Hot! Exactly what I need to see sometimes, kicks my ass to write! Great job!
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