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By : TrulyWished
  • From ANON - MaybeTommorrow on July 16, 2011
    LOVED IT~! But i usually do love your stuff. Great stories indeed. Thanks so much for another awesome Read!
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  • From on September 25, 2008
    omg...that was like.....the best edxenvy story i ever read!
    -gives cookies-
    you is awesome!!!
    write more edxenvy!
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  • From Mello on May 01, 2008
    So, basically I love this story. It's very well written. I was worried at first because I wasn't sure which direction this was going, but I love what you did. This is one of my favorite Envy/Ed stories...it just seems so like what their relationship could be like. Thanks for writing!
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  • From Safir84 on January 29, 2008
    First of all I want to say that you completely blowed me away with this amazing story of yours, I loved it so much! It was so beautiful, sweet, sad, dark, tragic and ect.
    And even though I loved it, I couldn't help but feel a little bit angry and hateful towards Envy for the way he treated Ed, but I'll always love Envy no matter what, so...never mind, hehe!
    And I more than loved the scenes were he actually was nice and somewhat loving towards Ed in his own twisted way, of course!
    Oh well, you said it; he's an asshole and indeed he is, but such a loveable one he is at that, haha!

    I really think the plot was quite brilliant and so was the portrayal of the characters and the interaction between them, you did such a good job! Even though Ed was a bit OOC, when he was submissive and all, I still loved him and the fic, of course too! But I guess I'll always want Ed to fight and not take anyone's shit, not but least Envy's, for that matter, hehe! Anyway, it was all very well written, you're such a talented writer, Kudos!

    Don't get me started on the smut, cuz that was just like mind-blowing, so freakin' hot and so good, I totally love it, hehe!
    And I really liked your ideas on why Ed always wore his hair long and the one about Envy "becoming human" or whatever, very good!

    All in all I really think you did a wonderful job here, on writing about two characters and their dysfunctional relationship, a very fine job indeed!
    And the ending was rather good as well, no scratch that, it was pretty fantastic!

    Thanks for sharing this wonderful fic with us! ps. Hope you'll write more Ed/Envy fic in the near future!
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  • From ANON - ravensfrost on October 19, 2007
    oh that was lovely. envy was sweet while still being envy. Ed was Ed like even though he was submissive and it was written beautifully. It almost feels like one of those older tales you read sometimes where you can read an interpret morals in the story without there being any overt moral. something like 'home isn't where your accepted for who you are but also for who you once were and who you could be'
    ahh sorry that probably just sound silly but it's meant as a compliment. I don't usually give long compliment usually just 'wow.nice' but I thought this story deserved an answer to why i liked it so yeah
    raven

    p.s wow. really nice
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  • From ANON - Ambre on September 06, 2007
    Since I've read this whole story a couple of times now, I figure it'd be polite to leave you a review. Where to begin? Firstly, since the focus of this fic seems to be on Envy/Ed porn, I'll go ahead and say that the story succeeds very well in being hot. I'm a sucker for OTP smut, and I'm not sure I've ever seen so much porn per word in an Edvy fic before. Good job there. Also, you introduced some intriguing ideas, like Envy possibly turning human, and Ed needing Envy to get by in Munich.

    And for your first time writing Envy, this is a reasonably solid Envy voice. I mean, Envy is a bit character in the anime; he doesn't have a lot of personality beyond wanting to kill Hohenheim and Edward and so on, and the characterization you've given him here makes sense. I really like fics where Envy is somewhat conflicted and wants to make Ed happy even as he simultaneously desires to hurt him, so I liked that aspect of this fic as well.

    Now, there is some constructive criticism I'd like to give you. I know you finished this fic a while ago and you probably have no interest in editing a fic which is already complete; I don't blame you there. But I figured maybe some concrit would help with your future writing endeavors, and possibly with Envy/Ed should you choose to write more of this pairing. The main point of concrit which stuck with me as I read this fic is Edward's characterization and his relationships with the other characters besides Envy. I know you stated upfront that Ed would be more submissive due to having lived helplessly in Munich for years, but Ed knew Envy before, so why doesn't he have more pride about things like crying in front of Envy? Also, when they get back home and Envy is no longer providing for Ed, why doesn't Ed flee from Envy, or fight back against him? With Al's and Roy's help, he could defeat Envy.

    I'm not trying to discourage the Envy/Ed relationship here, because I love that pairing. But I think given the circumstances, it might've made more sense for Ed and Envy not to have returned to Amestris. Then Envy could keep providing for Ed and keep having his way with him. Or, if they went back, as they did, it might've made more sense for Ed to have used Al's and Roy's help to turn things around on Envy and force Envy to abide by some boundaries of respect. As it is, I don't think I understand why Ed is content to let Envy walk all over him--as well as Al, to some degree, and others. Not only content, but gleeful. It just seems unbalanced, like Ed is sacrificing everything to be with Envy, but nothing at all is keeping Envy in check. Envy gets whatever he wants out of the relationship (or so it seems to me). I cannot fathom why this is appealing for Edward, or why Al and Roy and others wouldn't forcibly attack Envy regardless of Ed's wants--or, for that matter, why the military doesn't enslave Envy for being a homunculus.

    I don't mean to sound as if I'm trying to control your story. I enjoyed the fic, and I know you were mostly writing for the pairing and not the plot, but I think tackling challenges of the plot (instead of doing away with those challenges and just smoothing things over for Ed and Envy) would make the pairing aspect more tri-dimensional and interesting. If you write more Ed/Envy in the future and Ed is more difficult and struggles more, I think it might just make their coupling even more satisfying. Anyway, I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into this fic, so thank you for writing it. It was a fun read.
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  • From ANON - Beca on January 09, 2007
    Shit. Loved it, like, holy bleeping shit. The cutest, most horrible, made-me-want-to-laugh-and-cry-and-hug-someone Envy/Ed fic I've ever read. I think 'tis probably one of your best. You've made Envy such a lovable bitch, as he should be, and the character development between him and Ed (and in themselves) was believable and moving.



    Incredible.
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  • From ANON - pj on December 03, 2006
    that was really good, nice job. ^^
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  • From ANON - Koryu on November 16, 2006
    Perfect and great. I had a lot of fun reading it, thanks a lot for that beautiful story.
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  • From ANON - Nytflyer on November 15, 2006
    Your writing style is truly unique, and no you don't suck!, I dare say, keep it up, I think I'm turning into a fan of yours, this one made ball my head off!@!
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  • From ANON - Daniela on November 06, 2006
    so i was in denial about reading this story since it was with Envy but I think you did a great job in capturing their characteristics. Ed was a little different but I can expect that since he was in the other world and everythin. Amazing story. A little disappointed that Roy was not involve with Ed at all but you have all your other stories to make up for that. But since i've read all of them, I'm hopeing you will write a new one soon. maybe, hopefully. If you do, i'm sure a lot of people will read them. you have talent so keep writting. this is long so bye. take care.
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  • From ANON - Rieka on November 02, 2006
    Mmm. It's good. The interaction is a bit sketchy, but I find I like it very much. Perhaps a bit rushed in some points, but good. More than good actually.
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  • From on October 27, 2006
    This was an absolutely wonderful story, and I loved how Envy got sweeter toward the end. (My favorite character, the best, go Envy!) I cannot even fathom how much I loved this story. Great work.
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  • From ANON - milky on October 27, 2006
    Hmmm...so I'll admit, I started reading this for the EnEd and then got completely vectored onto the HeiEd subcontext in it, and wow, Ed and Envy's relationship is so amazing and brutal and...gah ;_; Poor Ed makes a deal with the devil to try and save something precious to him, and then he loses it anyway. Very powerful.

    Pretty much the only thing I'll note is that well, I really really think Al would be worried about Ed's relationship with Envy. It's obviously pretty fucked up. And Al hasn't had Ed for two years now, and so it's just hard to imagine he wouldn't be breathing down Envy's neck about treating Ed badly XD
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  • From ANON - jaden on October 24, 2006
    Wow, that's a great story. I never thought an Ed/Envy fic could hold my interest for very long but this is an outstanding piece of work. Keep it up.

    J_
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