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By : chayron
  • From Robyn on July 07, 2007
    AH! There's the semi happy ending I was hoping for! Eeek! Gohan had to go through the motions HOW many times? To finally get it right? But in the end, it was actually an action on Athara's part that made the pieces fall into place? GAH!


    Excellent story Chayron!
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  • From Robyn on July 07, 2007
    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! :( I've seen it coming, you've been mentioning it the whole story. Still. :( I didn't want it to end like that!

    It might have been better for Gohan if Tarrus had killed him.


    On to the last chapter.
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  • From Robyn on July 07, 2007
    Wow...these chapters are very long, so I will review for each, so I don't forget.

    I love Gohan and Anthra together. Anathra seems to be happy with Gohan, so what is all of this about have Deleros fire him? I don't get it; unless Anathra is doing it in order to keep Gohan out of danger?

    GRRRRRR, why did Wadra have to come and tell that to Gohan? I think Anathra's got a plan, and she may have just well ruined it!
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  • From cueball2 on July 06, 2007

    Awesome ending! "The truth shall set you free." That statement comes to mind in this chapter.


    Athara decided to trust Gohan with his secret and it changed everything. (As well as eliminating Tarrus' apparent enemy, Kaisho.) Great job.


    I wonder if you will write a mini-sequel. (Ha, I know how things intended to be mini, grow into monsters. That happened with my first fanfic.) It would be interesting to see where this new turn of events takes them.


    Sequel or not, I enjoyed it a lot. :)


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  • From cueball2 on June 06, 2007

    I figured Athura was who he turned out to be. Interesting point of view his character has. I look forward to the next chapter.


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  • From Robyn on June 06, 2007
    Oh, this just got way, WAY more interesting. :) Nice twist!
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  • From Robyn on May 26, 2007
    YAY! Anathra finally let Gohan in. Now I am just concerned if 'they' can survive this together. *sighs*
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  • From Robyn on May 19, 2007
    The strip poker was a lot of fun! I hope the blond (can't spell his name) doesn't go too far and get himself killed.


    Is Anthra going to take advantage of the fact Gohan has no clothes now?
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  • From Robyn on May 12, 2007
    Hmmmm, I wonder what role this new fellow well portray.

    POOR GOHAN at the end of the chapter! AAAAAH!
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  • From cueball2 on May 11, 2007
    Another captivating chapter! The new guy seems to know how to get what he wants, quickly; while Gohan takes his time. :)
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on May 05, 2007
    hi ^^ yeah. for my part, i dont miss that yelly-slymi-monster thing.
    but dont get me wrong please, it was "ewwwh", in good and exciting way.
    i loved the idea, to let that beasty slymi - thing attack, in the right situation.
    but itīs dead. good. r.i.p slymithing! *smirks*

    know what? i already forgott gohan and mirai trunks (future trunks).
    because you were absolutely right, with the OOC ( okay, of course you were!itīs your fanfiction^^)
    but what i mean is, that i have another two guys in mind, after i have read the fic once again, including the new chapters this time.
    and the thing is, that i donīt even miss trunks or gohan (the dbz oneīs i mean)
    errh. hm. i canīt explain that very well. sorry for that.
    i just trying to say, that your way of describing the characters and everything, is very adorable.
    yes and even the names are great! and all the other little details,
    you always care about in the fictions of yours. i really like that.
    it is very helpful to sink in the whole story and just to enjoy it, more. :)
    and whatīs more, normally, i dont really like OOC stories.
    (well, i wouldnt dare to say all of them. i do not read or know all of them, anyways.)
    But in fact, i can say, i really like yours. and of course, iīm looking forward,
    the next chapter.
    please keep on!!! d^^b

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  • From Robyn on May 04, 2007
    Ah, now the story is starting to warm up! I do like the interaction...a little concerned Gohan would hit him...but sometimes...

    Yes, glad to see so many updates in a row!
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  • From Robyn on May 03, 2007
    Very exciting chapter...not necessarily the kind of excitement you'd want to go looking for though.


    Nicely done!
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  • From Robyn on May 03, 2007
    My favorite part of chapter three was the end where Gohan was asking questions about Athara from Athara's aquantences, rather than asking Athara himself. :)

    Let's see if I have time to read part four.
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  • From ANON - Guice on April 29, 2007
    Oooooooh, predestened life for Mirai. This keeps getting better. I was thrown off with Darius' and delaros' namees for a bit. i don't know why... suppose i'm tired. There weren't any chibi's siting by a campfire thank you very much :P. My favorite part of this chapter had to be how you integrated Mirai's name into his idetity... well Athara's name. I thought it was pretty cool. Well, I'll be waiting for the next installment, hope life is treating you well.

    Gucie
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