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Reviews for The Sound of Silence

By : ZaKai
  • From Onyxlight on March 17, 2007
    Wow a wonderful angst filled wriet as per usual.

    Keep it up
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  • From ANON - dana on March 09, 2007
    oh my gosh was roy being abused by his mother (that's my thought). this was a really great chapter i can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - IZZY and his PC on March 08, 2007
    Wow.. he apologized! But judgeing by the first chap id say it doesent last long. this is a great story, and its sad that shit like this really happens :(
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  • From ANON - tati1 on March 06, 2007
    Ooh; that's an interesting development.
    Who the hell keeps their mom's ashes in an open bucket??
    Seriously though; very interesting insight into Roy.
    --tati1
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  • From squallstorm on March 06, 2007
    it's been a while since I last read this! I know how much this story bothers you, but your still doing a fine job of it XD. sorry i'm not more chatty XS i'm still in work mode

    kiki
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  • From TrulyWished on March 06, 2007
    *pout* Everytime I read this, it makes me more sad. poor Ed, still not sure what's going on, and Roy's just as screwed. Excellent job though.
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  • From ANON - Blissful Ignorance on March 06, 2007
    I kind of feel bad for Mustang... And Ed... And... Yea, bascially everybody. ^^; Ha ha, loved this chapter, it really showed a different side of Mustang and, finally... The scary old men didn't attack Ed
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  • From ANON - Nate_River on February 26, 2007
    Cool. Keep the good work, okay?^^

    I know that is a fic to show the terrible abuse of a child...but could you write the sex parts, please?

    Thanks!XDDD
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  • From ANON - morningstar on February 06, 2007
    as usual, a very good chapter, even if it took you very long (not that I'll blame you for that^^...I am very slow too), and also good description of the whole wanting/unwanting thing^^ I'll impatiently wait for more
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  • From squallstorm on February 04, 2007
    it's 'cool' (but not really) that Ed has a reaction to Roy's neighbourhood and walking through it. how he makes the connection between that and what Roy does to him very cool and subtile, nice

    kiki
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  • From ANON - Lola on February 03, 2007
    that poor kid. =(
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  • From ANON - WinterChanterelle on February 02, 2007
    It's hard to leave a cheerful review for something this serious... This is definitely one of the most disturbing things i've read, more so for being so utterly realistic. Not that i think Mustang's likely to abuse children, but if one was to imagine that he was, this is about how he would act... and how Ed would respond. In other words, this is so well-written that it's disturbing :) This fic makes me think of Velvet Mace's "Vulnerability", if i recall correctly. That was an extremely disturbing one-shot, here it's drawn out and all the more painful for that.

    The issue this fic deals with is definitely grave and i'm really GLAD it's coming out so dark and disturbing, because it would be plainly wrong to write on this topic and radiate joy. People need to know how horrible it is. I know someone who has been abused, although not to this extent, and i have to wonder whether it's left scars and lasting effects. I have to say, i'm very glad that you've started out by saying that Ed's killed Mustang - god, it would be horrendous to read this and know the bastard's still alive and well.

    Sorry for this long ramble - but it's your own fault to write fics that elicit this kind of a response :) I can't say reading this has left me in good spirits, but this was a piece of very good writing and i will continue reading it out of masochistic joy, or something =)
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  • From Niia on February 01, 2007
    Uh, very dark. Soo painful to read, still...I have too! It is one of a kind. You write well and handle the issue of abuse well. In its darkness and pain and sorrow, it is acctuly kinda beautiful. I'll be waiting for more chapters
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  • From ANON - Exploded Toilet Bowl on February 01, 2007
    Yay! I'd be looking out for your story here instead of FF yeah? :) Keep up with the good work. And Mustang's so evil! XD
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  • From TrulyWished on February 01, 2007
    I hate to not leave a review, because I love your writing, but it does make my tummy feel really gross. Roy's just so gross and poor Ed is trapped. Well written.
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