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Reviews for The Sound of Silence

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - milky on January 31, 2007
    ;_; Again, you manage to really make this visceral and it hurts. I am amazed you can survive writing it, it must really hurt :O
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  • From ursweetheartless on January 31, 2007
    this story feels like it was painful to write, its painful to read sometimes, but its still ... i dont want to say /enjoyable/, but its like a car crash almost. i have to say your doing a great job with it though, and i /want/ to keep reading even if it hurts a bit. poor ed... *fic love*
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  • From ANON - Hikaru9 on January 31, 2007
    *Stabs Mustang*

    I think that's all that really needs to be said...

    Wonderful work as always, you bend my emotional state to your will as always!

    aka aino hikaru
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  • From ANON - jifferbelle on January 05, 2007
    Oh poor ed!!

    Its sad though i like how you have dealt with this issue,
    most people don't go into the physique of the victim,
    but you have written this story quite well so far
    keep it up

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  • From ANON - Sevlow on January 04, 2007
    Wow.

    This is so heart-wrenchingly well written. You've captured the characters wonderfully . . . Your Roy makes my skin crawl with loathing, even as much as I ADORE Roy generally. . . You've made him a very believeable pedophile without compromising the character.

    In short: ZOMG THIS IS SO AWESOME!

    Update or I will bite you REALLY hard.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2006
    Interesting. i look forward to more. this is useful for understanding
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  • From ANON - Sam on December 28, 2006
    wow another good story by you!! i really hope you find time to update this one, its an interesting idea. Also i would love to get updated so i know when your story gets new chapters.
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  • From ANON - Just_me on December 24, 2006
    I was lurking around the FMA-stories when I fround yours and started reading it. First of all, I like your writingstyle. The way you started your story was amazing. Picking FMA was probably a good choice because of thew age-difference between Roy and Ed.
    I, myself, work at a daycentre with young children and it sickens me to hear stories about children being abused (in any form) by parents, friends or other people. It destroys a child for life and makes the people that try to help, feel helpless.
    Anyway, it doesn't matter that you made the characters OOC, it proves a point and gives a clear message about childabuse. Keep writing.

    ja ne^^V
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  • From ANON - Ari on December 22, 2006
    Aw, man... god, poor Ed.

    That's a really, really good reason to kill someone though.
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  • From on December 20, 2006
    I'm gonna cry. And freak the fuck out over what Mustang's doing to him. In a way I'm glad someones finally doing RoyxEd as nonconsensual .... without making it porn ... there's something real in showing it like this.

    Ack! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - milky on December 18, 2006
    :O Wow. This is really, really painful and powerful. Poor little Ed just wants to be loved...and in this AU with Roy taking advantage of him so completely...poor kid.

    This has hooked into my emotions and I'd love to see where it goes next!
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  • From ANON - Stupefied-narutard on December 18, 2006
    I'm really glad that you decided to press this issue to make it known to more people. Sex isn't just associated with romance, it's also a very cruel thing when you are being forced. Child abuse happens way too often... and... it's really like this. You really feel like you wanna throw up and there's always this knot in your stomach... And that group of men, ick, it's too real. It makes me want to puke. And many people really do burn themselves in showers to clean their unpure bodies. Thank you for making this known, please e-mail me when you update this. shitake_shroomz@yahoo.com Great job, btw.
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  • From ANON - morningstar on December 18, 2006
    wonderful chapter!And Roy had managed to become even creepier! I'm sooooo looking forward for chapter 4!

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  • From ANON - E on December 18, 2006
    Oh my. This is very well written.

    Your very good, so far this has been one of the most tasteful fan-fiction's on this subject that I have seen and had forced under my nose by a friend.

    Well done!

    -Bookmarks the pages.-
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  • From ANON - ursweetheartles on December 17, 2006
    omg, i was just reading this on lj a couple days ago and wishing there was more and *poof* there it was. i have to say ive read your work a couple of different places and i really like the way you write, and the royxed isnt too shabby either. in closing, i love you, :D
    and i wouldnt mind getting an email when the fic is updated :p
    ???
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