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Reviews for House of Vegeta

By : FireCracker
  • From liz on January 12, 2008
    Marty Sues, anyone? Please. Over rated is over rated.
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  • From Zofo on January 03, 2008
    I'm going to review the Highlights and Chronicles in their own review section rather than here. Hope that's okay (still a bit new here so don't know the rules).
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  • From Zofo on January 02, 2008
    Thanks Redcatt, I'm reading them now.

    The cute cub pelts, political intrique, Kakarott's possible insanity, Brolly, it's all keeping me completed immersed. I'm up to chapter 7 of the highlights so far - long way to go, yippee.

    PS. Just wanted to add that I discovered you wrote the Monkey Moon/Shine series whilst I was looking for these, so want to add my praise for them as they are some of my favorite fanfics. You Star!
    xxx
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  • From FireCracker on December 26, 2007
    If you want even more House of Vegeta, check out House of Vegeta Highlights and House of Vegeta Chronicles. These are separate stories that will fill in the gaps. This is the main continuity storyline. Highlights and Chronicles go back and forth in time and are not in chronological order, but they point to the main series.
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  • From Zofo on December 25, 2007
    Finished the last chapter now.

    Great info and details about power levels, education, tails, the Saiyan code (furball one was my favorite).

    Last but one chapter (41) was a repeat of a chapter 2, so that confused me, and the last chapter seemed to jump ahead, missing out how Kakarot became pregnant. Was it planned? I would have liked to have read about the conception, discovery, and discussions around it, especially between Vegeta and Kakarot. Maybe you could do a flashback to it during the sequel.

    I will be looking for the next story The return of Rhuntek when you post it.
    xxx
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  • From Zofo on December 24, 2007
    I'm up to chapter 33 now, only 9 chapters to go!

    Loved the embarrassing baby stories. Gosh isn't Kakarot eager to have another chibi? Will Vegeta let him though? With all the chaos the moon/gamma rays are doing surely there will be chibis everywhere!

    I'm left wondering what Frieza will taste like cooked, and frustrated that no-one read the archives yet.
    xxx
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  • From Zofo on December 22, 2007
    I've read up to chapter 24 now.

    This is such an intriguing story. I love all the politics and secrets. I also like how you are telling all the various histories. Also, the little details such as the types of food, tail signals, smells.

    Makes me wish I were Saiyan (sigh).
    xxx
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  • From LittleMustardSeed on December 21, 2007
    it's a good story but i'm slightly confused with the last chapters...
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  • From Zofo on December 20, 2007
    I think I've read this before somewhere but never had a chance to review it until now, so I'm reading it from scratch again.

    What a story, I love a good epic. You've gone into how Saiyans might have lived in such wonderful detail. I can really picture it.
    Kakarot was so funny panicking when Vegeta went into labour, calling the Ou father and dragging him out of bed, and the howling at the end of chapter 18 to mark the births read so natural for them.

    I'm only up to chapter 18 so far so will review as I go along, probably only about 6 chapters at a time so long way to go yet :-)
    Thank you for writing such a riveting story.
    xxx
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  • From kitkit on December 18, 2007
    love love...ive been waiting for the new chapter
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  • From wiccangirl1985 on December 18, 2007
    I've read your stories before and are glad your back. great update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - I come Anon! on November 21, 2006
    This is great, I'm not sure why you didn't get any reviews....kit-kit hardly counts, she makes up the bulk of your reviews, but if she really likes this...I don't know why that is... Anyhow, I really like these stories and am glad that this time you made chapters. Don't get discourges and stop writing, some people really don't know a good fic when they read one. But I'm just one person so...(shrugs). Well, I know I liked it and I hope you have some more. I hate seeing realy good fics with damn near no reviews. It's because people are so used to reading certain authors. What you want to do next time is not post all of the chapters at once or in too quick succession. You wan't to wait for the reviews to come in PER CHAPTER. Not one or two reviews for the entire fic. Pace yourself, bide your time. That's all. If you plan on coming out with another story, do this and wait for the reviews. People are reading and liking it, they just have to get up some nerve to tell you. I did, and I ain't shy about it! You are too talented to stop now and I see you as the queen or AlternateUniverse. I'm not being to forward or kissing ass, it's what I feel and so I hope you like it. Please do explore other pairings and plots. All of your fics don't have to involve Saiyans on some distant planet ALL THE TIME. It could be Saiyans on other planets, even Earth would make it a kind of AU, because Bardock, and the others don't really belong there so...that's just an idea, you don't have to listen to me but I was just saying. I like your stories and I know how fast your are with the updates so don't be shy to step outside of the box sometimes, you do but maybe you should do it more often but you don't have to change your writing style. Geez, this review is getting long....Well I'll just end by saying, that you have some serious talent there and there will always be people reading, and aside from kit-kit, some will occasionally review. It's a problem on aff.net, really, and so don't worry about it. Until next time, Alas!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 03, 2006
    wow love it
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 03, 2006
    oohh sneaky vegeta
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 03, 2006
    wow i love it
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