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Reviews for Feel Me, Shame Me, Heal Me

By : RyokoBlue
  • From ANON - sumire.syrup on June 12, 2012
    OMG this was so so wonderful. The relationship between the two is so strong and mature. I've slept only 4 hours for the last two days cos this fanfiction is pure genius. My only issue is that what about Major kristoff houser ? He was obviously the man that was going to buy the girls. And since the military got a hold of the list, should he not be punished?
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  • From roseoffate on March 27, 2012
    I don't like your story... I LOVED EVER MINUTE OF IT!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sarah B on August 10, 2007
    hey there! I think this story is also posted on fanfiction.net, but i wasnt sure if it would be a 'cleaner' version, so i stuck to AFF :) I just wanted to say I loved this story and I'm about to start reading the sequel *yay* I saw your myspace and I think I'm gonna add you, if thats ok, lol. I understand if its weird to add avid fans of your stories :) I just wanted to let you know you have a great talent, and I also like the royxwinry pairing! 'specially when you throw ed in like that! It sad...b/c I also favor the edXwinry pairing too....ugh the angst! The dark...sexy...loving man? Or the friendly, adorably-annoying, best friend...that could develop into more? It keeps me on my toes! Well, I do hope this review gave you a little ego-boost to keep you typing out more chapters! [im off to the sequel!]
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  • From hysteria82 on June 18, 2007
    it's a good start. Not a big roy/winry fan but you managed to get me interested.

    I do think you should drop or change the last sentence: Will you come along with me on my inner journey and face it with me? I don’t think I could go over all this again alone. What do you say? Come with me and together we’ll find out just what happened

    There's nothing wrong with that kind of ending if the character is talking to someone, but it's made clear that she's currently alone with Mustang... so who is she saying it to?

    it's not a big deal for fanfiction, but since you're trying to get a noval publish i just though i should point that out.


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  • From Dandalyn on February 27, 2007
    OMG!!that was an awsome story. At first i wasn't sure about the whole age thing, but after the second chap i was hooked!I spent i don't know how many hours reading it but I was up till 1am. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Josi on February 25, 2007
    Great sotry! I only can say it again! And the ending is very great as well. You did such a good job... I don't know what to say more... o.o
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  • From ANON - Winry on February 24, 2007
    I loved this story! I hope you finish the sequel soon. That was really good ^-^
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  • From ANON - Josi on February 11, 2007
    hey! I've been reading your story for a long time now. And I can only say that you do a really good job. The story is great and I always can imagine that the characters would act like that. I mean the original characters ^^".
    I love it and I hope that you can go on soon.
    Greetings!
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  • From ANON - sara on February 10, 2007
    had i been in roy's situation. i would have lit the bastard's hair on fire and let him run around a little and then shoot him. no way in hell would he be aloud to live after what he did.
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  • From ICKYintimidation on January 28, 2007
    ok... i just read chapter 19...
    oh my god.
    that's all i can say, i think.
    that had to have been the sexiest encounter so far...
    i... i'm just...
    i can't wait to read more... not only is this story incredibly sexy and enjoyable, it also has such a fantastic storyline. i know these are things i've said before...
    but that last chapter...
    ...
    i need a cold shower.
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  • From CPascal42 on January 15, 2007
    I've been around AFF a while and this is by far the best I have ever read. On a fanfiction level, it's brilliant. Realistic, in character, creative, and just something different. Not the same old pairs, an actually exploration of a relationship. As a piece of erotica, damn. This is hot, damned near every chapter. Suspenseful and engaging, the detail and emotions are intense. Anyone who can read this and not be aroused is missing something.

    The writing is pristine, events unfold naturally and such attention is provided to the detail and descriptions that it's like artwork. It's genuinely a pleasure (in more ways than one ;) ) to read this. Keep up the good work. If I hadn't spent most of teh night reading this I could give you a much better review, one that this work deserves. Instead you'll have to give me a chance to reflect on it and come back later. I'll head over to ff.net and review as well. This really needs to be a shining example of what fanfiction should be.

    Looking forward to reading more.


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  • From ANON - Darkfox on January 11, 2007
    Good job on this chapter! The father isn't such a mean guy... At the end at least, 'cause he's giving Winry a chance! Well, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - meliny on January 07, 2007
    please keep going. . . its good
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  • From ANON - ickyintimidation on January 06, 2007
    too lazy to log in...
    i just wanted to tell you that i am 100% addicted to this story! i come home from work every day and check to see if the next chapter is up. i love your style of writing, the story line... everything. this is a fantastic story...
    and normally, i'm a completely devoted to hughes, but you make roy so damn hot in this... lol.
    love it!
    *~lexi~*
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  • From ANON - Darkfox on January 05, 2007
    I love this story! I hope you up date soon!!!
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