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Reviews for Unnatural Attraction

By : DetoxAngel
  • From kiro880 on July 24, 2013
    loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2008
    *head falls onto desk and body spasms* Dear lord that was sexy. It took forever but I enjoyed all of it. I mean, ALL of it, from the beginning to end. I loved the interactions between Goku and Gohan, I loved Gohan's obsessive, violent nature. The smut was perfect and dirty. Wow! Kinda having trouble saying stuff about this fic because there was so much of it and I can't tell you EVERYTHING I liked about it. Just, *claps* great job. As for an answer to your earlier review, I have no problem with writing a topGoku Soncest story :D Would be my pleasure.


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  • From ANON - Ginia on June 28, 2007
    So much emotional trama for Gohan... and such a lovely ending. I'm looking forward to that sequel!
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  • From shevien on March 06, 2007
    another great fic! (very hot too!!)
    *scurries off to read the sequel*


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  • From ANON - kakoshan on November 14, 2006
    HOT! HOT! HOT! pleease, keep writing!
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  • From Revu on November 07, 2006
    Hurray for the plot lines! It's all fiction so no reason for any infinite number of pairings and possibilities to not be explored! You handled the development very well, the story keeps the reader fascinated at all times, and the progressional time line just sweeps you away with it.
    *Loves the Teen-Gohan-ness!* There should really be more stories with Gohan in them, almost everything in the Yaoi section is GokuxVegeta, GokuxVegeta, GokuxVegeta, GokuxPiccolo... hehe... but anyway, I think your story is a great addition to this section, it will definitely remain one of my favorites from now on!
    Where a sequal may be nice, this story actually makes a wonderful stand alone, but do hope you continue writing none the less, I'd love to see other stories you publish!
    Gosh this story makes me want to talk about it more, but since this is only a review, I'll leave it be with very nicely done. Was one of those stories that made you wish you could actually be the character! Till next time!
    -Revu
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  • From ANON - Niiro_Yuuyake on November 06, 2006
    interesting. it wasn't just like pwp, it was great! and hot!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 05, 2006

    I was a bit uncomfortable with the pairing, but you did a great job portraying the feelings and thoughts of the characters in this story.


    Each person's introspect was colorful and descriptive.


    I look forward to the sequel. Kudos.


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