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Reviews for Golden Apples

By : Xellass
  • From ANON - yohlenyaoilover on September 17, 2010
    Oh my god, this story needs to be finished! Its so freaking amazing!
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  • From ANON - Faith Kazama on April 06, 2009
    You say in your notes that you hope that Kai is not too OOC but is has to be obvious to you that he very much is. PWP doesn't mean that all the normal rules go out the window. It means that it's all about the sex.

    Also, I'm pretty sure Tala and Kai are the same size but you have Kai swimming in Tala clothes. And I'm pretty sure that even if your Kai hadn't formally learned to defend himself he still would've fought back when being raped. Seems like you've taken uke!Kai to the extreme.
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  • From on March 31, 2009
    chap4!
    poor kai! having to deal with borkov! i really cant wait to read what happens next! I REALLY CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I REALLY AM IN LOVE WITH THIS CHAPTER AND STORY! SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE IM BEGGING U MAKE MORE CHAPTERS SOON!
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  • From on March 31, 2009
    CHAP3!
    oooohhhhh love the love sex! kais so cute! GREAT CHAPTER! I REALLY LOVE THIS CHAPTER AND STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE IM BEGGING U ON MY HAND S AND KNEES TO MAKE CHAP 5 SOON! ILL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY AND DESPERATELY! PLEASE DONT KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE!
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  • From ANON - misange on December 26, 2008
    I have to say that I'm seriously becoming addicted to your stories. They are harsh and true, you don't skip the difficult parts at all if they go well with the stories; actually I think you thrive on does difficult parts, because not everyone would usually write such graffic sex scenes, some if not most unconsenting sex. The story s good enough to keep the PWP scenes interesting instead of repetitive and I love the way you describe the sex scenes: strong, highly hot and when you are doing the consenting sex extremely kinky and erotic (though that doesn't mean your rape scenes are not good, it is just that I don't really like unconsenting sex). I like this Kai a lot, strong despite the hard situations, and even though I feel bad for him because he has to deal with so many shitty situations. Your Tala here is quite charming though, I hope he is able to help Kai after all, scared or not. I admit that I read this BeyBlade fanfics expecting stories made by fangirls that wrote with what I call "chat lingo" with mary-sues abounding, strange japanese version of faces (such as TT.TT, that get pretty annoying when you are reading) and more than not cliched sex and love scenes (not that I'm saying they should stop, practice makes perfection they say), but I have been more than pleasently surprised by both your stories "Sugar is Sweet" and "Golden Apples", I must say that Kai as an uke is just too delicious on its own :p. I hope to read more from you, and hope you enjoyed this review!
    Cheers,
    misange~
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  • From ANON - Rapunzelle on November 15, 2008
    Loved it but poor kai, wheres yuri when you need him. Just one question who is vorkov. im not familiar with the japanese names as much. Please update soon.
    :-)
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  • From ANON - Laila on April 18, 2008
    Oh god... poor Kai, he has been through so much..
    please let him be fine again (with yuriy) so update :)
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  • From ANON - melissa on August 05, 2007
    can't wait till the next chapter
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  • From ANON - mel on August 05, 2007
    Awsome
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  • From ANON - d0n'T-h@t3-m3-c@z-U-@iN't-M3 on May 16, 2007
    UMMMM!!! that was totally delicious. DAMN you caZ i completely love ur work ;)
    KAI-UKE is pretty rare cause only a few can pull it of.... so HATS OFF!!
    & plz its a small request that plz kick tat b****** BORIS below the belt so hard that its a 1000times tat of wat he did to kai tat sick-perveted-old-bat AHHH!!! i sooo hate tat @$$*.
    PLEASE-PLEASE-PLEASE-PLEASE update soon
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  • From ANON - person on January 09, 2007
    Dammit, my review messed up. I really love this fic. I normally don't go for uke!Kai, but you make it work damn well.
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  • From ANON - person on January 06, 2007

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  • From ANON - Destiny3692 on December 23, 2006
    that was umm yeah that was a really good story you should really continue it really xddd. wow that was so very descriptive but still really good though.!!!!! Can't really type anything of what i'm thinking hahahaha
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  • From ANON - It is2 on December 14, 2006
    ........ they did cut me off = ( ......
    oh ironies of all ironies...........
    God's of faith = ( .....
    = o ....... I can't even remember what I said O o;; ......
    i believe it was...
    ~~~Yea, i would think kai would cry but you're right, it really is just a matter of opinions = )
    and...
    --- ._____. I'm not hyper, what are you talking about?! *hides sugar*
    I found this review amusing, I found your comment amusing, I don't no if it was meant to be amusing, but i'm weird and found it all very amusing and i like amusing thingz = D
    ...................................................yes.... i did just review to tell u.... all that... senseless... pointless.... leftovers....................................... ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - It is I!!! on December 14, 2006
    = D!!!!!!!!! it's me again!!! That's right the great and mighty game kid aka wtf xD- lmao = ) hahaha, no!! i read it!! and i was so SHOCKED u replied, and i was also very SHOCKED u were so nice = ) .... well ... i dunno, i thought it was nice -___-;; i may just be weird- ahahahahahaha........... ha.... lol, anyway, i no i no- things aren't meant to be taken seriously.... or make sense, and yada yada yada... but- i just haaaaaaaaad to point it out, it was just soooo ironic.... = D and hey, now u have another review on ur count even though iiiiit's... not really a review, well it sorta is kinda sorta kinda not....... = D !!!! Lol, I didn't take it into offense xD annnnnd i'm happy u didn't take it into offense (wait did u??? O o;; ) annnnnd....... iiiii'm really just rambling now = 0 ...... so anyway, i shall skip hence = D and fly away with the butterflies and hope kai's ass healz = D --- annnd i think i missed this in my last review... but for a second... i thought Boris was english Boris guy with goggles old man boris.... i no u mentioned him at the beginning under another name... don't question my logic though... and then i was like "ew it's boris" and then i realized u meant Bryan Boris, and i was like *whack self over head* ...... and yea i had to mention that because reading it... waaaaaaaaaas a lil awkward with strange metal images for a lil while... soooo yes.... and now i really shall skip hence

    sign
    Meeeeeeeee
    Game Kid

    P.S
    Once again praying i don't get cut off
    ~~~ u did say he ripped?? ... huh.... well then..... > >;; ... ignore that earlier comment then <
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