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By : DetoxAngel
  • From ANON - cabingirls on September 25, 2009
    I loved it! Goten is so cute, I'm glad you write Gohan and Goten!
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  • From Deathdeamon88 on July 17, 2009
    Great story! i enjoyed reading it.
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  • From LycianLecter on May 24, 2009
    Hey ^^


    Wow... hot story, really! When it comes to DBZ incest I actually prefer Vegeta/Trunks but... your Goku/Goten is just awesome!
    Thanks for writing it ^^

    Bye bye
    R.
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  • From ANON - Mmm on January 25, 2008
    Tasty, just plain tassstty.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2007
    Hey o/ loved your story, mostly when I see one of Goku's sons in love with hime it's always Gohan, this was the first one with Goten. The only thing I find it weird is that I can't picture Goku talking like that. But it's sure as hell damn hot.
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  • From ANON - kaze on July 18, 2007
    Yo!

    wow... good smut... (drools).. now i'd like to write one with bardock and Goku, or Turles and Goku..... think you're up to it?

    let's see... there was some mishap with dragonballs, someone screwed up, accidentally wishing back bardock/Turles...personally, that could be Chichi, trying to teach her wayward hubby some manners... buuut.... oh, it went soo wroong... in all right directions for our favourite saiyans, of course.

    and of course, Goku is more sharp than he lets on...your portrayal of him is good, but some sneakiness wouldn't be bad... or some saucy remarks he could shut his banshee of a wife though...

    So, up for an experimentation?

    PS: Write me some, will you?
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  • From shevien on March 04, 2007
    loved this fic. not much of a fan of 1st person p.o.v but i really enjoyed reading this.
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  • From ANON - FireFly on November 12, 2006
    FINALLY someone got Goku's height right! 5'8" is what the creator of DBZ said Goku was, but everyone always says he's over 6'. Bravo on that point. I don't see too many incest fics, but I'm not offended by them. If they're written right, I enjoy them very much. You did a fantastic job here. The only thing I would have changed is I would've made Goku uke, hehe. I just think he has an uke personality, even if he can be a sexual deviant :)
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  • From ANON - Eric on November 10, 2006
    It would have been better if Goku had been more dominant
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  • From ANON - TheRedeemer on November 10, 2006
    Your DBZ stories are outstanding! They've broken out of that ordinary mold and become something extraordinary. Its great that so much depth is developed while keeping everyone as in character as possible. Hope you'll consider doing a Trunks/Vegeta pairing as well.
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