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Reviews for Lust

By : Tyrana
  • From DevilWoman on November 25, 2009
    XD I love when is G/V and Vegeta personality remain intact XD not much people can do that sooo contrats!!! i love it!!! specially the end XD i dont feel sorry for chichi XD im a bad girl jajaja
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  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on November 27, 2008
    Lemon Lemon LEMON!
    =)
    You write them really well. Reading your one shots first, so I can't wait to get to longer ones =)
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  • From ANON - bob on December 18, 2006
    Good job, keep writing
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on December 15, 2006
    yah,i agree with kakarott. (without the cursing ^.~ but i agree! ^^ )

    @mr. dictonary himself: iīm not "we". never was "we". -.-
    i didnīt felt pitty and typed what i think. i always do.

    so donīt you dare call me "we" again. -.-
    speak for yourself, boy. not for US,or at least not for me.

    besides, iīm very curious now. so why donīt you show US your fanfictions hon, WE deserve to read
    some "exclusive words" from Mr. Fanfiction himself, donīt we heh ?!
    ...boy....
    you really need a girl/bofriend ...a nice pet or something.
    to be bored is no excuse to be an "§$%&/() , you got that?

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  • From ANON - KingKakarot on December 14, 2006
    Oh, the disgusting piece of garbage labeled Word of Advice, here are some words of advice for you: Fuck OFF! Nobody cares that your jealous because you can't write a good fic for shit. Please, no one cares for your mean accusations and jealousy. I wish I were as good as Tyrana, she's great and I ain't afraid to say so. And it's a shame and Word of Advice, you, or both of you, kindly shut up and keep that shit to yourselves. Thank You
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  • From Orchideater on December 14, 2006
    Although I agree with Firebolt about "semen-encrusted hole" being gross, I admit I very much enjoyed "pulsating meat." :D I guess the appeal of certain language all depends on a person's taste. Overall I thought Lust was a fantastic and decadent little lemon. Nice job!
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  • From ANON - Firebolt on December 13, 2006
    I respectfully suggest that you refrain from using terms like "pulsating meat". That and descriptions like "semen-crusted hole" from your earlier fic manage to completely de-rail your sex scenes by making them grotesque and funny rather than erotic. The basic premise of this fic was interesting, but your language choices are unfortunate.
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on December 13, 2006
    hi there, just keep on writing and donīt care about wannabe - comments, from jelous people who canīt write that well, they want to. itīs not worth to defend yourself. because as youīve already said, you donīt have to, anyways.

    i like your stories so much! playtime is my favou story from yourīs. ^^
    canīt wait, till youīll find time and inspiration, to upload the next chapter! ^.^
    take care and keep on your way of writing! believe me,
    theīre still much more people who like the stories of yours, than other ones, who wanna be pain in the ass! ^_____^ yap.

    may kami bless you d^^b
    bye. :)
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  • From ANON - Smoochies on December 03, 2006
    WOW, you know how to write sexy stories! Perfect erotic writings yo!
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  • From ANON - Tandy on November 29, 2006
    That was so fucking great. I mean.. whew! HOT !
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  • From ANON - Sonsofia on November 28, 2006
    Write the part two where Goku screws Vegeta with his power back! That would be so hot! I love you, oh my god! This was the hottest thing I've read in a while. You have some serious talent. You portrayed Goku down to a tee, he is fucking HOT. And Vegeta, woowee! He wanted some so he sure got some! More, we want more!
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  • From ANON - BustdustChick on November 26, 2006
    More plz? I want the power smexing XDDDDD
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on November 25, 2006
    aww, wow, that was great! (even it was to short. i wanted more ^^ )
    so, really good job!
    i liked it very much and i hope youīll write muuuuuuuch more stories.
    bye :)
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 23, 2006
    wow that was hot
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  • From ANON - Racoona on November 23, 2006
    you better make a 2nd chappie or a sequel so I get to see the smex with Goku fully powered up!! This was awesome *glomapage*
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