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Reviews for Desecration: Feral

By : sefiru
  • From Raholea on April 26, 2008
    *cries*
    i'm sad to see it end... is that ok?

    i just think feral goku- sorry, kakarrott (sp?) is utterly cool. and good vegeta, for acknowledging he can't try to survive as a human- HE ISN"T ONE!!! good boys... *tries to pat heads*

    ok.. nmv.. i think vegeta just tried to bite me... *runs in terror*

    I'll catch your next fic!!!
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  • From Zofo on April 25, 2008
    Is Goten going feral too? Look out Trunks!

    Nice touch to make it into a nature reserve, after all, they are an endangered species. Shame they can't breed. I would have loved to see feral cubs.

    Thank you for an enjoyable read. I'll be looking for your next story.
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  • From kitkit on April 25, 2008
    wow i loved the lemon, it was short, but it went well with it
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  • From Zofo on April 13, 2008
    I'm glad Vegeta has finally given in to his instincts, he didn't have much choice in the end, and isn't going to bother fitting in with the humans anymore. I love the idea of them living all wild and free.

    Sad that the finale is next as I wanted more. I know, I'm greedy, but I'm sure the lemon will make up for it.
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  • From Raholea on April 12, 2008
    *sniffs* i was missing another chapter with the hot silver fox, so i checked out your dbz fics. and i found a new chapter here... *glomps*
    for some reason i really like feral Goku. there's something more manageable with him like that. and i'm looking forward to the lemon next chapter. ~_^

    *whines and begs for more*
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  • From kitkit on April 11, 2008
    love it...i could of told vegeta that kakarott always gets what he wants
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  • From LainQui on April 11, 2008
    LOL it would be funny if in the end they all joined Kakarott
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  • From ANON - Angela on April 04, 2008
    sooo i decided to check out your dbz.....now i'm not sure which fic i want updated on fridays O_o

    Loved this :)
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  • From kitkit on March 29, 2008
    love the story, and i hope vegeta decides to put the saiyan porn to good use.
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  • From Zofo on March 28, 2008
    The part where Vegeta had Kakarot chained and pinned him in a most vulnerable place was great, I want to read more, as it seems this was not an isolated incident, but it seems Vegeta may be regretting it or at least his body is it believes they have bonded.

    Oh Vegeta now has Saiyan porn books, I want to hear more :-)

    What could be wrong with Goku? Is it mpreg? Go to him Vegeta!
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  • From kitkit on March 08, 2008
    wow im liking this alot
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  • From ANON - CrimsonTide on March 07, 2008
    Another great chapter ^.^ Seems to me that Vegeta is slowly becoming just as feral as Goku. Interesting indeed!
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  • From topbear1974 on March 07, 2008
    excellent chapter. I loved the way how they hunt and interact. beautiful beast. kaka willingly let vegeta be on top. will the prince finally trust and let kaka take control .... I can't wait to see more.
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  • From Zofo on March 07, 2008
    Vegeta's acting almost like he's going feral too. Is it catching? Even at home it was like he was trying to recreate the cave. I predict he won't be able to keep away very long this time.

    I loved the howl Vegeta made to initially get Kakarot's attention, and the grunts, gestures and actions they used to communicate. Who needs words! It was a bit bloody with the dinosaur but perfectly in keeping with how I imagine a feral Saiyan to act, and the explanation as to why Kakarot was able to survive as a feral was very believable as well.

    I'll be waiting for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2007
    He had a mate. It was just a matter of going to fetch him.

    This sentence made me go "Ohh yeaaah!!"

    I’m planning to have those Saiyan instincts come back and bite Vegeta in the ass

    Please do that as soon as you can *-*
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